Plz Criticize and lemme know how to fix or make better for my new game (hopefully)
Triadon - A Starter for my new game. (name not final)
type: Ground
It is not interesting enough to be an pokemon...So I suggest add an pattern on body or something. The 2 horns on top not look right to me :/
But great job on sprite! I rate it 8/10:)
o thank u well wat do u think needs fixing
From a purely technical point of view, the shading is too flat and is all done in straight lines, which just makes it look 2D even more and defeates the purpose of shading. From a design point of view, it's not even a Pokemon. It's a cute little triceratops. However, the linework isn't bad, especially on the horns and tail (actually, now that I think of it, they look like they're taken from a different sprite)
Oh, and double posting is a no-no here.
Lines are too straight, making it look 2d. Shading and stuff reminds me of how cystal does it - Were you aiming for that?
i dunno wat i was aiming for i was deciding like "well lemme try to sprite something" lol and well i guess i didnt focus to much on it... any pointers any1??
i edited triadon and well i really just flipped the horn lol does it look better
Please do not double posting! Instead click on edit button bottom of your comment and add something...
Back to topic-better horns....but the shading seems to put on it randomly
The offical sprite have light on left upper area. :/
ok well heres a even more fixed version of it. i do not understand the whole shade thing but i know a lil. anyway there goes the updated one
EDIT: well i tried to make it lots better plz um critizce it and if u can fix it or add something plz post