Ok, I will :P
First, there are too many loose pixels floating around. Try rounding the maps out.
Second, the topography is wrong, the shore is always low.
Third, have you ever heard of the large city sprites? Don't use loads of little cities next to each other it just looks odd.
Hope that helped ^_^
I totally agree with The Phantomad. Also, have you heard of towns?
I made a new map.
Comments and improvements please. Something is missing but I don't know what.
![[Image: FinalMap.png]](http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm119/ps2madawoolf/FinalMap.png)
Missing the ground and waves beneath the land. Look at Houndoomed's tutorial to see what it is. Otherwise, nice! There is that really long route, maybe you could put a Pacifidlog-like (sp?) town there.
I agree, also the south-westernmost route is quite odd. PArt from the weird bend, what happened to the town there?
dont ask about the bend
that long sea route is like victory road on water :)
will add waves and maybe a key XD
I was mostly shocked by the squashed town.