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It's kind of easy to tell who's talking here.

I don't know the whole ancient story behind the Legendaries in Acanthite but this is just a perspective I had

Revenge

Is there a way I can make you reconsider?
From doing an act so bitter?
Why do you thirst?
For such evil to come first?

Because I am the one
That had everything done
Done to protect what I see
Then she came to make a fool out of me

We are friends, yes?

I guess…

You know what they say?

What do they say?

What are friends for, if they can’t tell you when you’re wrong?

Ha! Wrong? What do you see as wrong, my friend?

I see wrong as when one disturbs the balance.
And it cannot be seen by your glance.

Why not?

Because you see only the shadow,
And she can see only the light
My words may sound shallow
But in truth, I am right.

What make’s you so sure,
That what you see is pure?

My friend, am I not the entity of time?

Time is only a system created
To keep everything dated

True but as I am Timeless friend,
I have such time to ponder things to their end.
I saw the end of the discussion of light and shadow, balance it was.

Enough!
I am tired of your ‘balance’ what a bluff!

I am sorry to tell you this, but accepting the truth is Tough
Do you think I had no quarrel within myself?

How do I know she hasn’t sent you herself
To stop me from fighting back
While she is in lack,
Of the strength she needs
And if I attacked her now, she would plead…

I fear for you
I cannot stop you
All I can do is pray for you

For Time is like an hourglass
While one side is emptying
The other is harvesting.
And the split second they are the same
Everything could be resting
But does It?
They continue, and when someone turns it upside down
The process in truth, is never resting.

Keep that in mind, Diavil
its great i just have a few itsy bitsy suggestions xD

No offence but the beginning was extremely good, but lacked power. If I were a total jerk I would tell you it was written like a docter seus book. I think a couple things that need to be changed are the rhyming, and the way you change from style to style through your words. I liked it, and I enjoyed the idea of, I guess Arceus preaching to Diavil but keep in mind what i have said, K.thnks

braii~
Well it was actually Geminine talking to Diavil but okay I'll keep that in mind in my future attempts.
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