14-12-2008, 08:04 PM
Spoiler Warning for those who watch the english Naruto. There's content in this story that has not been revealed in America yet! (Even though I think English Naruto sucks)
AN: The prologue will be split into two parts. Also note that I posted this on another forum as well. Please Enjoy the first part of the prologue!
Naruto started to catch on and started hiding away on Saturday often hiding in alleyways if possible. The villagers were lucky that news didn’t reach the Hokage since if he found out the villagers would be dead on the spot. Naruto would usually escape the beatings, but today was different.
‘I got to hide! I don’t want to be beaten,” Naruto thought as he tried to run to his usual alley hide away.
The villagers caught on to his tactics, now they were hiding away in the alleyways of Konoha making sure that the “demon” would die today. The villagers got there long wooden poles today slamming them on the ground using the earth as target practice.
“The demon will die today!” The villagers whispered amongst themselves.
It had been minutes later when Naruto had nearly reached his favorite hideaway until groups of villagers surrounded Naruto, wooden poles in hand. The slammed them on the ground getting ready to strike. One villager then grabbed Naruto by the collar and started to beat him.
Many of the villagers joined in the act and started to beat him to. Thoughts wrung in their minds thinking of how the demon would die this day, today after countless attempts. Naruto moaned loudly, he was in pain. Many of the poles were aimed at his back and some hit his eye. Crimson liquid came from the boy after each moan. Crimson blood flowed out of his skin and sometimes flowed out of the bottom of his eye lids.
“Why—why are you—try—ing to kill me?” Naruto asked leaving broken words out of his mouth. He then screamed in pain.
“You demon! You don’t belong here!” The villagers shouted totally ignoring the boy’s question. Soon a gust of wind blew some of the villagers away blowing them backwards away from the agonizing Naruto. Soon groups of ninja picked him up and left to the direction of the hospital.
“What is the meaning of this!?” A voice shouted in anger. The voice wrung in everyone’s ear and registered the voice. It was their, Hokage.
“Hokage-samma we were just trying to kill the demon!” One of the villagers shouted and soon chants of the same line were exchanged.
“Naruto is not a demon! What if the 4th hokage were here! He would be disgraced, if his dying whished was not honored! He would kill you right on the spot after the first title of action on killing Naruto! He would show no mercy!”
--
It had been hours after the attack on Naruto. He was taken to the hospital. All the medics were trying as hard as possible trying to mend his wounds and find any fatal injuries. Naruto however was not aware of this since he was unconscious and somehow was experiencing something different.
‘Where am I?” thought Naruto. He was in a dark place; sounds of liquid could be heard falling against the liquid covered ground. Naruto was in front of a cage with a seal on it that meant ‘fox’ Naruto was confused eyes scanning the cage.
Soon a shadow enveloped Naruto only a fox like grin was seeable. Red energy attempted to flow out of the cage, but it failed as the red energy was sent back.
“Hello jailer-san,” The voice spoke in a monstrous tone soon shaking the cage with its voice.
“Who are y-you?” Naruto asked in a tone of fear.
“I am the great Kyuubi!” It answered; its voice shook the cage once more.
“Impossible! We were told that the 4th killed the Kyuubi!”
“Wrong!” Kyuubi said in another monstrous tone, “the 4th only sealed me into a baby boy! And that boy was you!”
Naruto stood in shock for a moment. He pondered over what had been said, the Kyuubi had been the reason why he was nearly killed, the reason why he had been hated by almost everybody around him.
“Y-you’re the reason why I have been so hated, so alone!”
“Anyway, I have managed to heal most of your wounds, but the eyes are the problem,” The Kyuubi stated totally ignoring Naruto’s remark, “you will end up blind the next time you wake up, so don’t be so surprised when you see nothing, but darkness when you wake up.”
“Why are you trying to help me?”
“If you die then I die, so I am trying to keep you alive!”The Kyuubi sighed, “my very existence rest in your hands.”
“So if I die then you die to?”
“Yes, but no more questions! Your brain is taking back its consciousness, so don’t be afraid or surprised when you see nothing, but darkness!”
Soon Naruto could not see the cage anymore.
--
“What is your report?” Sarutobi asked.
“Naruto has been fully healed, but it seems that he will go blind, we are sorry Hokage, but we can’t seem to heal his eyes.”
Sarutobi sighed in relief, at least he was alive. If he had died, Minato would probably haunt him for the rest of his life, but he was unsettled. Naruto had gone blind.
~End of Part 1~
AN: The prologue will be split into two parts. Also note that I posted this on another forum as well. Please Enjoy the first part of the prologue!
Prologue: The Blind Eyes
It was an average day for Naruto Uzamaki. He was hiding away from the villagers as usual. Even though the law provided protection of some sort the villagers of Konoha had started a weekly beating, beating him up every Saturday.Naruto started to catch on and started hiding away on Saturday often hiding in alleyways if possible. The villagers were lucky that news didn’t reach the Hokage since if he found out the villagers would be dead on the spot. Naruto would usually escape the beatings, but today was different.
‘I got to hide! I don’t want to be beaten,” Naruto thought as he tried to run to his usual alley hide away.
The villagers caught on to his tactics, now they were hiding away in the alleyways of Konoha making sure that the “demon” would die today. The villagers got there long wooden poles today slamming them on the ground using the earth as target practice.
“The demon will die today!” The villagers whispered amongst themselves.
It had been minutes later when Naruto had nearly reached his favorite hideaway until groups of villagers surrounded Naruto, wooden poles in hand. The slammed them on the ground getting ready to strike. One villager then grabbed Naruto by the collar and started to beat him.
Many of the villagers joined in the act and started to beat him to. Thoughts wrung in their minds thinking of how the demon would die this day, today after countless attempts. Naruto moaned loudly, he was in pain. Many of the poles were aimed at his back and some hit his eye. Crimson liquid came from the boy after each moan. Crimson blood flowed out of his skin and sometimes flowed out of the bottom of his eye lids.
“Why—why are you—try—ing to kill me?” Naruto asked leaving broken words out of his mouth. He then screamed in pain.
“You demon! You don’t belong here!” The villagers shouted totally ignoring the boy’s question. Soon a gust of wind blew some of the villagers away blowing them backwards away from the agonizing Naruto. Soon groups of ninja picked him up and left to the direction of the hospital.
“What is the meaning of this!?” A voice shouted in anger. The voice wrung in everyone’s ear and registered the voice. It was their, Hokage.
“Hokage-samma we were just trying to kill the demon!” One of the villagers shouted and soon chants of the same line were exchanged.
“Naruto is not a demon! What if the 4th hokage were here! He would be disgraced, if his dying whished was not honored! He would kill you right on the spot after the first title of action on killing Naruto! He would show no mercy!”
--
It had been hours after the attack on Naruto. He was taken to the hospital. All the medics were trying as hard as possible trying to mend his wounds and find any fatal injuries. Naruto however was not aware of this since he was unconscious and somehow was experiencing something different.
‘Where am I?” thought Naruto. He was in a dark place; sounds of liquid could be heard falling against the liquid covered ground. Naruto was in front of a cage with a seal on it that meant ‘fox’ Naruto was confused eyes scanning the cage.
Soon a shadow enveloped Naruto only a fox like grin was seeable. Red energy attempted to flow out of the cage, but it failed as the red energy was sent back.
“Hello jailer-san,” The voice spoke in a monstrous tone soon shaking the cage with its voice.
“Who are y-you?” Naruto asked in a tone of fear.
“I am the great Kyuubi!” It answered; its voice shook the cage once more.
“Impossible! We were told that the 4th killed the Kyuubi!”
“Wrong!” Kyuubi said in another monstrous tone, “the 4th only sealed me into a baby boy! And that boy was you!”
Naruto stood in shock for a moment. He pondered over what had been said, the Kyuubi had been the reason why he was nearly killed, the reason why he had been hated by almost everybody around him.
“Y-you’re the reason why I have been so hated, so alone!”
“Anyway, I have managed to heal most of your wounds, but the eyes are the problem,” The Kyuubi stated totally ignoring Naruto’s remark, “you will end up blind the next time you wake up, so don’t be so surprised when you see nothing, but darkness when you wake up.”
“Why are you trying to help me?”
“If you die then I die, so I am trying to keep you alive!”The Kyuubi sighed, “my very existence rest in your hands.”
“So if I die then you die to?”
“Yes, but no more questions! Your brain is taking back its consciousness, so don’t be afraid or surprised when you see nothing, but darkness!”
Soon Naruto could not see the cage anymore.
--
“What is your report?” Sarutobi asked.
“Naruto has been fully healed, but it seems that he will go blind, we are sorry Hokage, but we can’t seem to heal his eyes.”
Sarutobi sighed in relief, at least he was alive. If he had died, Minato would probably haunt him for the rest of his life, but he was unsettled. Naruto had gone blind.
~End of Part 1~