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These are my first fakemon sprites. I just started so they might not be very good. So here they are!(Top-Oldest Bottom-Newest)

Snowter

Renasnow

Fancelow

Cherl

Starem
I MAY take requests. Depends on how you guys like them :D

(27-09-2009 09:14 PM)Coolx23 Wrote: [ -> ]These are my first fakemon sprites. I just started so they might not be very good. So here they are!(Top-Oldest Bottom-Newest)

Snowter

Renasnow

Fancelow

Cherl

Starem
I MAY take requests. Depends on how you guys like them :D

Alright, time for some cc and c.

Snowter looks somewhat believable, you just need to redo the shading and add more color than black to the outline. If you look at an official sprite, you see that there's more than black.

Renasnow is okay, but needs a major redo, as it is hard to tell what I am looking at.

Fancelow is WAY too big. The official size is 80x80 pixels. Also, It is in a very strange pose. I can't even tell what I'm looking at. Is it renasow's evo, or a Swellow evo? Either way, it needs a major redo.

Cherl's outline makes it look like its a jiggling circle. Is it a Cherubi prevo?

Starem just wouldn't sell as a pokemon. First off, it's facing directly to the front. It needs to be at 3/4 view, like all others. Then, it just doesn't even look alike a pokemon. It just looks like you scratched a star, colored it to look like Starmie, made the gem green, and added spikes in too many places and with bad depth. I'm sorry, but if I bought a game and caught that, I'd sell the game and never buy a new one.

Otherwise, your first sprites are Way better than my first scratches!

(28-09-2009 01:56 AM)Red Gyarados Wrote: [ -> ]

(27-09-2009 09:14 PM)Coolx23 Wrote: [ -> ]These are my first fakemon sprites. I just started so they might not be very good. So here they are!(Top-Oldest Bottom-Newest)

Snowter

Renasnow

Fancelow

Cherl

Starem
I MAY take requests. Depends on how you guys like them :D

Alright, time for some cc and c.

Snowter looks somewhat believable, you just need to redo the shading and add more color than black to the outline. If you look at an official sprite, you see that there's more than black.

Renasnow is okay, but needs a major redo, as it is hard to tell what I am looking at.

Fancelow is WAY too big. The official size is 80x80 pixels. Also, It is in a very strange pose. I can't even tell what I'm looking at. Is it renasow's evo, or a Swellow evo? Either way, it needs a major redo.

Cherl's outline makes it look like its a jiggling circle. Is it a Cherubi prevo?

Starem just wouldn't sell as a pokemon. First off, it's facing directly to the front. It needs to be at 3/4 view, like all others. Then, it just doesn't even look alike a pokemon. It just looks like you scratched a star, colored it to look like Starmie, made the gem green, and added spikes in too many places and with bad depth. I'm sorry, but if I bought a game and caught that, I'd sell the game and never buy a new one.

Otherwise, your first sprites are Way better than my first scratches!

Thanks. I always liked Snowter :D. Apperantly I made those colored outlines a bit to dark. I get the habit of doing that sometimes XD

I see. Renasnow does look wierd. i might edit it.

I wasn't paying attention to the size again XD. Fancelow will defentaly be one of them I will edit. And it is a Swello evo.

I tried to make the circle look as best as I could make it. It took multiple tries till' I just gave up and picked that. And Yes Cherl is supposed to be a Cherubi prevo

I never actually liked Starem. I tried making it looked turned but it never looked right. I guess I forgot that I wouldn't post it up :P.

Im a beginning scratch spriter too, but one thing ive got down is eyes:

Still havent got borders down.
You need to give more definition to the eyes, and more complex shading.
just a bit of critizism