17-10-2009, 10:05 PM
17-10-2009, 10:33 PM
Its actually pretty good. I suck at Sugi C+C, so I'll wait.
18-10-2009, 05:54 PM
The actual shading is great! That's the hardest bit of sugimori style. The thing letting it down though is the poor line quality. They shouldn't be all pixelated, they should be slightly anti-aliased.
19-10-2009, 03:04 PM
Well, I must say the color palette and the shading method is correct, but I must say I agree with Riceeman. The lineart is too pixelated and looks a little trembling (althogh that was parcially fixed doing a image with a big resolution and then shrink it). A problem with the shading is the fact the light source isn't well defined... Really I can't say from where comes the light when I look the tentacles o_ò
20-10-2009, 01:03 AM
The lines are a little thick, and the parts where the tentacles end dont looks as refined as a tutorial i saw. Heck, i cant even sugi, so what do i know.
Nice first attempt.
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Nice first attempt.
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20-10-2009, 01:06 AM
Pretty close, Well definitely better than me xD, But I dont think you should make the lighted parts fuzzy lookin.
21-10-2009, 04:37 AM
Absolutely terrific. I would say make a background that helps out with the shading, or give it a shadow so we can definately see where the light source is coming from. Other than that, AWESOME!
29-10-2009, 04:42 AM
Well, it's not awful, especially compared to mine, but it isn't great. Keep practicing, and you'll be great.:cool: