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I would like to note that I was one of the guys that didn't make their Chapter in time, but in the end, I got myself to make one.

Really love Nate's Chapter too. Good luck with writing Pookie's chapter!
OMG! Another post with 2 Chapters in it! =O

Chapter 24
Spoiler:
Snookie had managed to get out of the desert, and into a mountainous area in the Australian continent. Unfortunately, he had no idea where he was.
“Oh great!” he groaned. “Where the crap am I now?”
“Not Canberra, that’s for sure,” said an eerie voice.
“Not what I expected for an answer, you stupid moustache,” Snookie replied, slapping his forehead with a hand while eying his moustache.
“Well, excuse me, Snookie,” the moustache responded. “But from the looks of the surrounding area, we’re somewhere in the MacDonnell Ranges, which is further west of Canberra than we were a week ago.”
“Man, I should have known better than to crush that watch,” Snookie groaned. “Now I have no idea where we’re going.”
“I told you it was a bad idea to crush that watch.”
“No you didn’t!”
“I didn’t? Well, it is!”
“Ah shut up, you stupid moustache!”

An hour of traveling later (in addition to pointless arguing), their conversation hit an interesting topic.
“What Miltank Man said that day,” Snookie muttered. “Could it be true?”
“It’s possible,” Snookie’s moustache responded. “The five of them barely show you any respect.”
“But what about the time they…” Snookie stopped. “No, they used me as shark bait that day.”
“Shark bait?!” his moustache exclaimed. “That’s messed up!”
“But there was the time they….” Snookie once again stopped midsentence. “No, they pushed me into wet cement.”
“Okay…” the moustache responded. “I see where this is going.”
“What do you mean?” Snookie inquired.
“Miltank Man is trying to play you against the Organization,” the moustache explained. “That way, Fangking will be one step closer to stopping our plan.”
“What do you mean ‘our plan’?” Snookie replied. “You had nothing to do with it.”
“Point is that if Fangking stops the plan, the five of your friends will be locked in jail or possibly given a death sentence while you go off free for helping him,” the moustache explained.
“Yeah, but can I really call those guys my friends?” Snookie asked.
“Snap out of it!” the moustache responded. “You’re beginning to fall right into their hands.”
“But those guys barely give me any respect,” Snookie groaned.
“La-la-la-la-la! I’m not listening!” the moustache shouted.
“Not to mention they…” Snookie once again stopped midsentence, but this time to a very strange site: a ninja carrying a large box of cereal.
“What would a ninja be doing with such a large box of cereal?” he pondered.
“Maybe there’s a secret cult of cereal-wanting people somewhere and that ninja’s a part of it,” the moustache suggested.
“Nah,” Snookie replied. “That’s stupid. Don’t be ridiculous.”
“You’re right,’ the moustache agreed. “I have no idea what I was thinking.”
Suddenly, the ninja approached them.
“Say, you want to join a super cool cult?” the ninja asked Snookie.
“A cult?” Snookie asked. “What kind of cult?”
“The cult of the Frosted Flakes,” the ninja answered.
“Say what?!” Snookie responded in astonishment.
“Yeah,” the ninja answered. “We collect cereal around the world to offer them to the cereal overlord so that he may appear on this world and CONSUME IT!!”
“Uh….. No….” Snookie answered, stepping back slowly.
“Oh come on, man,” the ninja said, stepping closer to Snookie. “Join us…… Join us…. Join us…. Join us….”
At that moment, Snookie jumped off a nearby ledge in an attempt to get away from the ninja.
“Ah man,” the ninja groaned. “They always do that.”

Minutes later on the bottom of the ledge, Snookie was gasping for air.
“Man, you were right,” Snookie gasped, eying his moustache. “But in this case, it was weird that you were right.”
“I know,” the moustache replied. “That was just crazy.”
“We gotta stop these guys from summoning their cereal overlord or this world is doomed,” Snookie responded.
“But where do we find their secret headquarters?” the moustache inquired.
“I….. do not know,” Snookie groaned.
At that moment, Snookie’s eyes opened wide to the sound of someone saying, “Connection established…..”

Chapter 25
Spoiler:
Somewhere on the African continent, David observed Lord X-Giga-X, who was in a meditative state.
“Uh sir,” David inquired. “Exactly what are you doing?”
“I’m trying to get in contact with the other members of the Organization,” Lord X-Giga-X. As he said this, a dark aura formed around him.
“Is the dark aura thingy normal?” David asked.
“Never mind that,” Lord X-Giga-X responded.
The dark aura quickly grew, enveloping David and Lord X-Giga-X. After doing so, the dark aura transformed into a large, dark sphere which hovered above the ground on which the two men stood.

Inside the sphere were 6 wide pillars. David and Lord X-Giga-X stood on one of them.
“What is this place?” David gasped.
“This is the place where we will discuss progress,” Lord X-Giga-X.
At that moment, five small spheres appeared over the other five pillars.
“Connection established,” Lord X-Giga-X grinned. “Let the conference begin.”
At that moment, the spheres transformed into portals which pulled the other members of the Organization onto the other pillars.
Missingno and his robot appear on the pillar to the right of the one Lord X-Giga-X stood upon. They were the first to appear.
“Whoa, what is this place?” Missingno inquired. He then noticed Lord X-Giga-X on the pillar. “Oh, it’s you.”
Snookie appeared on the pillar to the left of Lord X-Giga-X.
“Whoa, first I’m lost and now I’m here?” he responded, scratching his head.
Zadon appeared on the pillar to the right of Missingno.
“Oh, hey Nate,” he said. “What’s the deal? Where are we and why are we here?”
Kudamon appeared on the pillar to the right of Snookie. Ziebart, Deathstorm and Grovyle appeared soon after.
“Kudamon, you have any idea where we are now?” Ziebart asked.
“Maybe Lord X-Giga-X can explain,” Kudamon answered, eying the man.
“Just one more person to wait for,” Lord X-Giga-X responded.
Hak appeared on the pillar between Kudamon and Zadon.
“Okay, can someone please tell me what’s going on?” Hak asked.
“Yeah,” Snookie said. “What are we doing here?”
“I brought you all here…” Lord X-Giga-X stopped when he noticed Ziebart. “Okay, for one thing, why is Ziebart with you?”
“One, it’s not Ziebart,” Kudamon answered. “It’s a clone. Two, he felt the need to help me. It was an offer I couldn’t refuse. Believe me.”
“Okay,’ Lord X-Giga-X sighed.
“How’s it going, bro!” David shouted.
“Okay, why is he here?!” Kudamon shouted.
“Why is Deathstorm here?” Snookie asked.
“Why are you here?” Deathstorm responded.
“KNOCK IT OFF!” Lord X-Giga-X shouted. “I did not bring you all here for you to yell at each other.”
“Okay, so why did you bring us all here?” Hak asked.
“I think we should report our current progress,” Lord X-Giga-X answered. “Talk about any problems we’ve come across.”
“That makes sense,” Kudamon agreed.
“Okay, then I’ll start!” Nate said. “Okay, I’ve been doing find. The only real problem I’ve had so far is that annoying Kalas.”
“I’ve had to deal with Count Splatula for a while, but no worries,” Hak commented.
“Yeah, and that’s because you keep flooding the countries,” Kudamon noted.
“Hak, we need the people alive if we’re going to enslave them,” Lord X-Giga-X responded.
“Oh, right,” Hak replied.
“What about your problems, Kudamon?” Snookie asked.
Kudamon simply pointed at Ziebart.
“He meant other than me,” Ziebart groaned.
“Other than you, the only thing that really messed me up was that earthquake,” Kudamon answered.
“Now that you mention it, that earthquake gave me trouble too,” Hak realized.
“Not surprising that an earthquake of that magnitude would occur,” Lord X-Giga-X spoke.
“What do you mean…?” Kudamon then stopped to think, and then shouted, “Omega! It had to have been Omega!”
“That’s crazy,” Missingno replied.
“But it makes sense,” Kudamon argued. “Remember the first time Giga here used that technique? He knocked the planet of its orbit by half a mile.”
“That’s right,” Hak agreed.
“Can I just say something here?” Snookie asked.
“No!” Kudamon shouted.
“Kudamon, let Snookie speak,” Lord X-Giga-X responded, raising his voice.
“Thank you,” Snookie began. “Anyways, you ever notice all the people asking for cereal lately?”
“Now that you think about it, yeah,” Zadon responded.
“Well, I just had a run-in with a member of a so-called cult of the Frosted Flakes,” Snookie continued.
“Cult of the Frosted Flakes, you say?” Kudamon inquired, raising an eyebrow. “That sounds… really made up….”
“Blame the people who started it,” Lord X-Giga-X answered. “Please continue, Snookie.”
“These guys are trying to obtain all the cereal in the world and offer it to their cereal overlord so that it can appear on Earth and consume it,” Snookie resumed.
“Say what now?” Deathstorm responded.
“And they attempted to recruit me into this,” Snookie responded. “But I refused their offer.”
“This is just weird,” David grimaced.
“Yet threatening to our plot,” Zadon commented. “We gotta stop these guys.”
“Wait, which plot?” Snookie asked. “Our plot or the-”
“Not the one that would be breaking the fourth wall if you mentioned it,” Kudamon answered.
“You mean like you just did?” Missingno asked.
“Aw man!” Kudamon groaned.
“Okay, how’s your end, Zadon?” Lord X-Giga-X asked.
“Pretty dull,” Zadon answered.
“Okay,” Lord X-Giga-X answered. “Now that that’s settled, I’d like to say one more thing.”
“And that would be?” Kudamon pondered.
Lord X-Giga-X reached into a pocket in his coat and pulled out a medal. He then tossed the medal towards Deathstorm, who caught it.
“What’s this?” Deathstorm asked.
“Snookie, are you pondering what I’m pondering?” Kudamon asked.
“I think so Kudamon, but then it would be called a box-cake,” Snookie answered.
“Wait, what?” Kudamon exclaimed. “That’s not at all what I was pondering!”
Deathstorm looked at the medal, and then noticed the letters “O G-X” engraved onto it in bolded letters.
“No way,” Deathstorm gasped.
“Deathstorm, you have shown tremendous effort to the empire,” Lord X-Giga-X spoke. “Not to mention you’ve pulled the six of us out of a pretty tough conflict that one day.”
“I never thought that we would get out of that alive,” Snookie sighed.
“So it is with great honor that I admit you, Deathstorm, into Organization G-X,” Lord X-Giga-X concluded.
“Oh my god,” Deathstorm responded, attempting to hold back the tears of happiness that began to arise. “Thank you….”
“Dude, congrats!” Hak cheered.
“Excellent work there, buddy!” Kudamon congratulated Deathstorm.
“May you show us greater effort out on the field as we continue towards our goal,” Zadon responded, throwing his fist into the air.
“This conference is hereby concluded,” Lord X-Giga-X announced. “Everyone, let’s continue our goal of world domination.”

Minutes later, the dark sphere evaporated into the air, and David and Lord X-Giga-X were standing in the sand.
“Hey, what gives?” David asked, looking around. “Where is everybody?”
“I sent them all back to wherever they were before I made contact,” Lord X-Giga-X answered. “Now come on. We can’t control the world if we’re standing here doing nothing.
“Yes sir,” David boasted.
The two of them continued on their path to their next destination…

Meanwhile, a mystery African man holding a staff was traversing deep within the Congo.
“It won’t be long now…”

Woohoo! 25 Chapters of the fic completed!
That means that the next Flashback Chapter will appear soon. =O
But with this begin the end of the first quarter of the fic completed, I'm gonna make 2 Flashback Chapters before beginning work on Chapter 26.
That's awesome! I really liked this! Needed a little.... crazEness.....:P

Nice job Giga! Really liked how it was. I think the connection established thing didn't turn out so ominous as you made it sound, but no problem there. Can't wait for the next chapters =D
That was very awesome. I love how Pookie's Mustache came alive and talked(or, at least, in hi s mind it did). I agree with Pinchy, however, that the Connection Established sounded more ominous until I learned what it was. I was expectin them to become partial-slaves, but be upgraded/more powerful.
Anyway, great chapter! Especially the expanded cereal thing!
Just a little note.
“Miltank Man is trying to play you against the Organization,” the moustache inquired.
Use the right verbs, Giga. XD

“I brought you all here…” Lord X-Giga-X stopped when he noticed Ziebart. “Okay, for one thing, why is Ziebart with you?”
“One, it’s not Ziebart,” Kudamon answered. “It’s a clone. Two, he felt the need to help me. It was an offer I couldn’t refuse. Believe me.”
“Okay,’ Lord X-Giga-X sighed.
“How’s it going, bro!” David shouted.
“Okay, why is he here?!” Kudamon shouted.
“Why is Deathstorm here?” Snookie asked.
“Why are you here?” Deathstorm responded.
“KNOCK IT OFF!” Lord X-Giga-X shouted. “I did not bring you all here for you to yell at each other.”

EPIC

“What about your problems, Kudamon?” Snookie asked.
Kudamon simply pointed at Ziebart.
“He meant other than me,” Ziebart groaned.

Even more epic.

“Not to mention you’ve pulled the six of us out of a pretty tough conflict that one day.”
“I never thought that we would get out of that alive,” Snookie sighed.

Wondering what that's about...?

Anyway, great chapters, I love the fact that Deathstorm is one of us now. :D Should I add him to the entry in the Forum Dictionary?
(24-04-2010 05:23 PM)Kudamon Wrote: [ -> ]Just a little note.
“Miltank Man is trying to play you against the Organization,” the moustache inquired.
Use the right verbs, Giga. XD
AAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHh!!!!!!!! Why do I keep doing that?! Dx<

Anyways, the next Chapter will be the first part of a four-Chapter-long mission to rescue a member of the Organization.

*goes to fix verb error*
Only a quarter now? So that means 100 around Chapters? Awesome!

I really liked the Chapters and now that I understand the 'connection established' parts, it's even better!
Flashback Chapter 5
Spoiler:
The following week, the group was in the cafeteria with other people working in the facility.
“Hey, Afti! What’s up, dude?!” Snookie greeted a man with orange hair.
“Adam, how’s life for you?” Missingno asked a man with brown hair and a black T-shirt.
Lord X-Giga-X sat at a table with Hak, Zadon and Kudamon. Lord X-Giga-X stared at Kudamon’s Treecko.
“It’s amazing that you’ve had that Treecko for so long, and it hasn’t evolved yet,” he responded to Kudamon.
“Yeah, but don’t worry,” Kudamon assured. “It will be a Grovyle soon.”
“Right…” Zadon muttered as Missingno and Snookie approached the table.
“Lunchtime, my favorite time of the day,” Snookie said as he sat down at the table. “I wonder what I’m gonna eat today.”
“Let’s order a large pizza with everything on it,” Hak suggested.
“Good idea,” Kudamon agreed. “I’m really in the mood for some pizza.”
“So, who’s gonna call in this-” Missingno started, but he was quickly interrupted by a large, steel box crashing onto their table.
“WHAT THE CRAP?!” Snookie shouted in astonishment.
Everyone in the room stared silently at their table, and then turned towards a large, bulky man approaching the table.
“Who the heck is that?” Zadon whispered to Hak.
“I don’t know,” Hak whispered back.
“Whoever he is, he looks pissed,” Snookie noted, staring at the angry expression on the man’s face as he reached the table.
Zadon, Hak, Kudamon and Missingno turned their attention to the same angry expression.
Lord X-Giga-X, on the other hand, ignored the man and removed the box from the table.
“You six are becoming a real thorn in my side,” the man growled.
“What?” Zadon replied. “What did we ever do to you?”
“You decided to work here,” the man answered.
“Not true,” Snookie argued. “I was married to someone who made me work here. I divorced her, and THEN I decided to work-”
“I didn’t ask for your life story,” the man growled.
“Hey, you can’t treat Snookie like that!” Hak shouted.
“Yeah!” Kudamon agreed. “Only we can treat him like that!”
“That’s right… HEY!” Snookie gave Kudamon an angry look.
“…. Well, it’s true…” Kudamon shrugged.
“You guys are really getting on my nerves!”
The man raised a fist, but then lowered it as soon as he noticed Fangking and Cipher approaching the table.
“We’ll settle this later,” the man replied, walking away from their table.
“I knew there would be conflict between your groups,” Fangking said, sitting down besides Snookie.
“Yeah, but…” Cipher stated, but quickly noticed everyone still staring at them.
“There’s nothing to see here. Return to your regularly scheduled lunches.”
Everyone soon returned to eating their food and talking amongst themselves.
“This box would make good building material,” Lord X-Giga-X noted, measuring it.
“That can wait,” Fangking responded. “We have important information to discuss with you regarding that man.”
“Okay, so who is he?” Missingno asked.
“Well explain it in my office,” Cipher answered, beginning to walk away from the table.
“But what about lunch?” Snookie asked with a moan.
“We got pizza there,” Fangking answered.
“Okay, then let’s go!” Snookie stood up but then caught his leg caught under the table and fell.
“Oh brother,” Lord X-Giga-X muttered.

A few minutes later, the eight of them were in Cipher’s office with Pyro and a man with black hair that had blue streaks running through it. All of them were eating slices of pizza that Cipher had ordered.
“So, what’s the deal with that man?” Lord X-Giga-X asked as he reached for another slice of pizza.
“And how much did this pizza cost?” Snookie asked with a grin.
“Snookie, that’s irrelevant,” the man answered.
“Lorem, I need you to stay quiet for the time being,” Fangking ordered the man.
“Yes sir,” Lorem answered. He stuffed a slice of pizza into his mouth.
“Now,” Fangking began, “the man that antagonized you is known as Micro Jupiter.”
At that moment, Kudamon spit out chucks of pre-chewed pizza onto Lord X-Giga-X’s face.
“Oops,” Kudamon chuckled. “Sorry about that.”
“Micro Jupiter?!” Snookie exclaimed. “You actually hired someone as dangerous as Micro Jupiter?!”
“Who’s Micro Jupiter?” Lord X-Giga-X asked, wiping the cheesy mess off his face.
“Micro Jupiter is a man that almost obtained power to destroy all life on earth,” Pyro answered.
“One night, he snuck into the facility in an attempt to steal the blueprints for our reactors in order to create another one to fuel a very powerful- and dangerous- fusion cannon,” Cipher explained.
“But the reactor would not have stabilized to the cannon had he managed to go through with it,” Fangking added. “It would have detonated, creating an explosion powerful enough to destroy the earth.”
“Whoa,” Lord X-Giga-X responded with a horrified expression.
“Luckily for us,” Pyro continued, “Snookie accidently knocked me unconscious the same day Micro Jupiter snuck in.”
“I said I was sorry,” Snookie muttered.
“I woke up midway into his plot and foiled it,” Pyro chuckled
“Had Pyro actually gone home, we’d all be dead,” Fangking assured.
“He was exiled from the city for his actions,” Cipher continued. “He was supposed to be gone forever, but he snuck back in under a new name which is not used by us.”
“He attempted to get a job here under that name,” Pyro noted, “But I recognized him right away and turned him into the police.”
“He was sentenced the death sentence, but we’re allowing him to stay alive under one condition,” Fangking said.
“And the condition was?” Hak asked.
“That he works for us for minimum wage,” Cipher chuckled.
“But we should really say ‘below minimum’,” Pyro laughed.
“We pay him WAY less than we pay you six,” Fangking grinned.
“I get it now,” Zadon responded. “He’s mad at us because although our pay is low, ours is higher than his.”
“Exactly,” Lorem pointed out. “Micro Jupiter is a dangerous man and we don’t want you to have to deal with him.”
At that moment, the door opened, and the large, muscular man entered the room.
“Oh, hey Micro,” Pyro muttered.
“Cipher, I want to talk to you about my pay,” Micro Jupiter said in a deep tone.
“The answer is no,” Cipher replied. “I will not give you a raise.”
“Oh come on!” Micro Jupiter raised his voice. “Why not?!”
“We have our reasons,” Fangking answered. “Now leave us and return to your room with the others.”
“Fine,” Micro Jupiter growled. He began to walk out of the room, but then turned around and approached Lord X-Giga-X.
“Is there something you want,” Lord X-Giga-X inquired.
Micro Jupiter stared at the antagonizing expression Lord X-Giga-X was giving him.
“You must be Lord X-Giga-X,” he growled. “You have the same murderous expression as your father.”
“What’s that supposed to mean?” Lord X-Giga-X growled, getting out of his chair.
“Micro, leave now,” Fangking growled.
“Ugh, fine.” Micro Jupiter left the room, slamming the door behind him.
“Wow, what a cheery man,” Snookie responded sarcastically.
“It’s amazing how he and those other ex-convicts he works with get along,” Pyro sighed.
“What other ex-convicts?” Hak asked hesitantly.
“We’ll talk more about this later,” Fangking assured him. “Now, the six of you take two boxes of pizza back to room.”
“Yes sir,” Snookie shouted as he grabbed three boxes of pizza off of Cipher’s desk.
“Snookie,” Cipher growled.
“Fine.” Snookie put on of the boxes back on Cipher’s desk

Minutes later, Micro Jupiter walked down a hallway and approached a door marked “117-alpha”.
That man, Micro Jupiter pondered as he opened the door. Could he be the son of Lord X-Me-X-Ga-X?
Yep, I actually gone through with putting in a member that's been banned from the forums FOREVER. And the other ex-convicts have also met with the same fate.
Who are the others working with him? Will there be a possible rise in friction between his group and the pre-Organization? And exactly who is Lord X-Me-X-Ga-X?
Find out in the next Flashback Chapter, which will be coming soon.
IT IS A FLASHBAcK CHAPTER OF YAY! I like the Micro Jupiter part, but I don't know much about him... however, I can just search him. Anyway, I liked how the chapter went, and how you left us with this new twist. I also think I may know who Lord X-Me-X-Ga-X is, but I'm probably wrong, and I won't say in case I'm right.
(28-04-2010 09:03 PM)Argorok Twilit Dragon Wrote: [ -> ]IT IS A FLASHBAcK CHAPTER OF YAY! I like the Micro Jupiter part, but I don't know much about him... however, I can just search him. Anyway, I liked how the chapter went, and how you left us with this new twist. I also think I may know who Lord X-Me-X-Ga-X is, but I'm probably wrong, and I won't say in case I'm right.
Lord X-Me-X-Ga-X was mentioned before in Flashback Chapter 2, and was revealed to be the father of Lord X-Giga-X.

And now for a random piece of trivia regarding the man:
Spoiler:
By the time the Flashback Chapters started, Lord X-Me-X-Ga-X had already died.
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