(29-07-2010 07:47 PM)Pookiesnook Wrote: [ -> ]I place a curse upon thee who lowered this to 4 stars. ;)
Hello, pleased to see you, too.
Humor is bland, for the most part, and the art-style is clearly trying to be minimalist but simply comes off as bad. I'd recommend duller colors, a rough texture, and thinner lines.
Thanks, I try. :) The whole point of it is, I can actually get a cheap laugh out of people by making a terribly bland comic that people somehow like. :D
I'm speechless. I don't know whether I like this one or not, but... whoa.
I don't even know, really. I wanted to make some sort of response to Afti, but I simply couldn't because I totally agreed with him. So, I decided to literately show how I feel about this comic. I don't actually like it at all, really. It has no point, doesn't even follow the forum, really, and it only gets its "humor" from bland jokes and random characters. Ziggy kinda summed this one up. It wasn't funny because it wasn't suppose to be. It was me yelling at myself for even creating this thing.
Doesn't mean that I wont stop though. Just because I dislike it doesn't mean I hate "drawing" it.
Lol. That was pretty amazing although I don't seem enough of an arsehole in this :P
I'd make it a tad smaller because it's really hard to read.
Anyway, I still enjoy reading this stuff so as long as people like it, it can't really be bad. Keep up the good work.
The second to last panel looked like two lumps of clay getting it on. Thats why I love the art style you've chosen. You can perceive it as whatever.
^^ I thought the same thing.
I loved the ending where you started to swear at FC.
I love how I'm controversial both on the forums and in the comic :P