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Sometimes i get some random ideas in mind.... and sometimes they result in poems. These poems are pretty good, but not great, so... please C+CC on my poems.

unnamed poem:
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Thin grass caresses my skin,
As i look up above.
With myself showing a grin,
As i watch two peaceful doves

Leaves sway from left to right,
With a soft wind blowing,
As the leaves show light,
As nature's best is showing.

My eyes begin to close, as the peace starts to sink in,
My breathing slows.....
And my imagination begins.

I can hear the birds sing,
A song nicely sung...
As i drift away with the peace,
As my calmest dreams begun.

I wake up later, Without a knowledge of time,
The silver moon is out, As i keep that dream completely mine.

Whisper
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Whisper, all you can say…
Let it out, let it free..
Make this wait short…
Let our love truly be.

You’ll never know how much I care,
If you never whisper, All you can say.
Never keep us waiting, Let it out…
Don’t keep me waiting all day.

Just say it, its not so hard,
I promise not to tell,
Make my day by whispering these words,
Don’t make my life a living hell.

Whisper those golden words, say what I want to hear..
Don’t hold back, let it out…let it free..
Im in love with you, is something I don’t fear

I’ll give you time, but only for so long..
Please, Don’t make my wait forever…
Or my love for you will be completely gone.

Time:
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What is time?

Is it a thing?

Or a sound?

To me of course..

It's a place of no bounds.


The same thing happens,

When time goes by..

A hand moves slowly..

As i wither by..


The minutes...slow and bleak..

The hours....

Always meek..


What would happen if time can be changed?

We ourselves may not know..

We cannot, it's not as easy as they say


Alas, the idea of it shall be of naught,

As time itself is a limitless thought.

That is all i have at the moment. I'll post more later.



NEW... Come and join

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Confetti flies as the sun drops
Smiles rise, as tensions fall
Cake gets into small hands, yet, none left for all.

A sad little boy sits in a bench, Twiddling his fingers around
Hiding in his little world, Not making a single sound.

Time passes by, as a small part of the universe is untouched, stopped in time…

Everybody moves on, as the little boy continues to twiddle his small fingers, as time passes by.

Once the candle was blown out, the small boy stood up, with his head down.

Everybody stared as they know that they left him aside.

The boy soon sensed the negative neglect everybody has given him.

Confetti lays on the cold ground, lifeless, as the moon shines it silver light on the earth.

Smiles start to flip, as tensions rise among everyone, a fight against the two sides of life is about to begin.

Cake soon starts to be placed on tables, all untouched.

a first day 10 year old walks up to the lonely boy, he smiles and gives him a piece of cake.

The cycle continues, as years pass, yet time in this matter, continues to be the same form, untouched.
come and join is not much like a poem, its more like a short story.


Worries: 6/16/10

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Worries could crack a man,
Could strip a soul out of flesh.
Could flip a smile to a sad,
Worries will always seem so fresh.

Worries could break a brain,
Could rip it up, piece by piece.
Could cause a man to go insane,
Will make a man to beg for peace.

Worries could stop your dreams,
Can truly block your paved out trail.
Worries can be everywhere it seems,
Worries can make a grown man bail.

Worries are like monsters, they never seem to leave a man alone.
But worries could seem more evil, if those worries are clearly shown.
I really liked all three of these! Nice job, Starr! =D

Totally keep going. These are awesome. I might have some ideas for a name for that unnamed poem though :D
(06-05-2010 10:59 PM)crazEcaptain101 Wrote: [ -> ]I really liked all three of these! Nice job, Starr! =D

Totally keep going. These are awesome. I might have some ideas for a name for that unnamed poem though :D
Thanks, i really put in a lot of effort into those poems. They took me very little time though, mostly because my ideas come and go very quickly.

I'm working on a new poem right now, i might post it on Friday.

And the idea's for the name of "Unnamed poem" I'd like to hear it.^_^
Sorry for the double post. AND for not updating this thread at all over the past month. =/


Well anyways, I have a new poem for you all. Fresh out of my notebook.

Here it is.. Worries:

Spoiler:
Worries could crack a man,
Could strip a soul out of flesh.
Could flip a smile to a sad,
Worries will always seem so fresh.

Worries could break a brain,
Could rip it up, piece by piece.
Could cause a man to go insane,
Will make a man to beg for peace.

Worries could stop your dreams,
Can truly block your paved out trail.
Worries can be everywhere it seems,
Worries can make a grown man bail.

Worries are like monsters, they never seem to leave a man alone.
But worries could seem more evil, if those worries are clearly shown.

More will come soon.
Worries.... FTW!!!

Loved it completely, and how true it is. I know worries break my brain. I CANNOT (well, I might be able to) wait for your next poem!
These are all very good, you should continue.
Gah! Almost to the 2 month cut-off. Thankfully, I have an update.

Here is a new written thing I call "Silence." It's no poem, But it's pretty neat in my opinion. Enjoy!

Silence:
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Silence...Is but a sound..
Which emits no sound at all..
So what kind of sound does silence make?
Silence...Makes no sound...But an imaginary whisper..
Which we can...and can't hear..
It's in our thoughts..in our mind it lays in which...we cannot take it out..
Silence....Is but a thoughtless thought, With a soundless sound
A feeling...Yet, Without a single touch to feel by..
Silence is but a part of our Idle brains, In which it keeps it idle to begin with. And keeps us sane at the same time.

I kinda feel poetic right now so you might expect some more work by me later on in the day.
EPICNESS! I know I posted about this on your forum, but you could probably use this one too. Plus, I really like your poetry :D
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