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The title of the manga is Pokemon Masters or Pokemon New World
As the the title says i have an idea for a Pokemon Manga. I might do this manga in a couple months. Im just the idea guy not the drawer. This is my idea for the 1st chapter. ENJOY!
Basically its 15 years after a new Pokemon master is made. Guess who?
Now in Pallet Town a new trainer, Soul, is getting to start his journey. Soul wakes up and falls off his bed. Today Soul turns ten and is going to get his first Pokemon. from Professor Oak He goes down stairs to find his mom. Instead of his mom a Pokemon jumps on him. After the Pokemon stops licking him he sees a note on it. He reads it and its from his mom. It says that his mom has some urgent business to attend to and that the Pokemon is his. The Pokemon is a Purflare, the fire cat Pokemon. Now that its settled he dashes to Oak Laboratory with Purflare following. Once he gets their he bumps into Larry Oak(wonder whos son this is XD). Larry tells Soul that he has his Pokemon and that Soul should hurry. Soul runs into the lab and bumps into Professor Oak's assistant, Tracey. Tracey tells Soul that Professor Oak had to go somewhere and that all the starters are gone. Tracey asks Soul how he got Purflare and Soul says from his mom. Tracey then says that he has a present for Soul. Its an egg and its from one of Tracey's friends. He says that Soul should walk around in the wild with the egg to see if anything happens. Soul is walking around with his egg and Purflare. He accidentally steps on Purflare's tail and it spits out fire on something. The "something" was a Touflee, the vicious bird pokemon. Touflee calls its friends and chase Soul(sound familiar). One of the Touflees hit the egg and it hatches. It is Pichu, the electric mouse pokemon. Pichu uses Thunder Slash on the leader Touflee and then all of them flee. Soul, Pichu, and Purflare then watch the sunset. Meanwhile, two mysterious are talking to another Mysterious guy. They say that the plan will begin and Kanto will be theirs.

yeah, I like it. I want to help you....but i can't draw

same here
this club at the high school im going to next year is going to help me

oh, so thats why you'll start in a couple months, sweet.
hmm, so are you going to write subsequent chapters over the summer? or will you wait till the drawing gets started?

I have some character bios for now.
Soul: The hero. He is very adventurous and will protect anyone that is in danger. His mom works almost the whole day so Soul doesnt see her. Soul's father is still a mystery. We do not know if he is alive or dead. He thinks that Luke and Alyssa are going out.
Pichu: Soul's pokemon/best friend. Pichu was hatched by Soul and its parents are unknown. Pichu likes to sit on top of Soul's shoulder. Pichu is always out of its pokeball.
Alyssa: The heroine. She is very shy(mostly around Soul) and can be very bold(mostly around Soul). She is the daughter of Brock and Angelina. Yes I am talking about THE BROCK. She has feelings for Soul, but Soul doesnt notice. She joins Soul after he beats Brock. Cousin of Luke
Luke: He is the son of Garry Oak and Great-Grandson of Samuel Oak. He knows a lot about pokemon. He is the rival of Soul and they will later on travel together. He knows that Alyssa likes Soul and he helps her. Cousin of
Marcus: He always wears a very old robe and never takes of the hood. His true name is unknown. He takes Soul as his apprentice after defeating Soul in a pokemon battle.

TO BE CONTINUED....or edited XD

Well, these new pokemon in your story and Soul, do you have any drawings of them at all? I can't really make out how the story goes if I don't know what the characters look like. And, IMO, your character got two pokemon already WAY too quickly.

So your going to draw a manga, but you can't draw?

First off, pretty sure this belongs in the art section, not here.
Secondly, if you can't draw then why not just write? That's what I do, instead of leeching off of the work of others.

(24-05-2010 10:20 AM)TheFallenOne Wrote: [ -> ]Luke: He is the son of Garry Oak and Grandson of Samuel Oak. He knows a lot about pokemon. He is

Just need to add, Garry Oak is Prof.Oak's grandson. So that doesn't make sense.

Also, I'd also suggest writing it seeing as nearly everybody would rather be the idea guy but not many people would draw for you.

So your saying i should just quit