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"Well he is coming to that age," sighed Blaze.
"Wait what!" screamed Blaze. "I do not like her! I don't think of her that way. I am older than you Blaze so don't talk like that. And I wasn't staring at Rose!"

Blaze yelled at himself?

Anyway, nice flashback, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks ATD I fixed it. Well just finished a new chapter and I am ready to put it up for you guys to read. Well basically this is a talk and walk chapter. Literally I am not kidding.

Chapter 10 - Follow the blood stained road
Spoiler:
The biggest and the most secure Prison in The Game known as Alakatraz actually was destroyed. The ceiling was missing and the walls were destroyed to a rubble. The guards were nowhere to be seen in the prison. Outside of Alakatraz was a war between two sides. One group was running away from the prison. This group consisted of Soul, Blaze, Hiro, Soul, Jason, and Reyn. They were running for their lives. After they escaped from Alakatraz every single went after them. Their group was getting tired and the guards were closing in on them.
"Oh my god!" Reyn screamed. "They are closing in on us!" Reyn was so scared that he started to vanish where he was standing.
"Is it just me or did Reyn disappear?" Soul asked with a confused look.
"Well Reyn is a Kecleon," Hiro stated. "When they are afraid they turn blend in with their surroundings. Either that or he needs to use the bathroom and he doesn't want anybody to watch."
Reyn reappeared in front of Rose. "Okay then," Reyn smiled. "I am done."
"Ew gross!" Rose screamed. She kicked Reyn and sent him flying.
"I think he beat us to the meeting place," Blaze laughed.
"If you guys didn't notice," Jason sighed. "We are being chased by people that want to kill us!"
"Oh yea I forgot about them," Blaze smirked. "Ready Soul?"
Soul nodded and the both of them turned around. Both of them stood where they were.
"What are you guys doing?!" Reyn yelled.
"If they keep on following us to the meeting place they would reach it too," Soul stated.
"So instead of leading them to the place we should fight them here!" Blaze shouted with excitement.
"But..." Reyn cried.
"They have a point," Jason agreed. He walked next to Blaze and Soul.
"Me and Hiro will stay back here since we are not fighters," Rose said.
"Then stand back," Soul demanded starting to get more serious.
Soul's body started to spark with electricity. The electricity covered his whole body. It was eager to be let loose. Blaze was making a fireball in his mouth. Smoke was coming out of his mouth and through his nose. Even his ears were filled with the smoke. Jason was just standing there. The guards got closer and closer to them. Then the three of them finally let loose. Soul sent out a massive thunder bolt to the guards that fried some of them to a crisp. Blaze coughed out a large fireball that went to the guards. The guards tried to run from the fireball, but it didn't work. They were engulfed by the flames and their bodies were no more. Jason ran through the guards slicing any of them that were still alive. His blades were thirsty for blood of the fallen guards. After they took out almost all of the guards only a few were left. They fled before they could get slaughtered by them. Jason and Soul sat on a nearby rock after they fled.
"Damn it!" Jason sighed. "They ran away!"
"It's okay," Soul replied. "At least they won't be bothering us anymore."
"That was fairly easy," Jason bragged.
"Hurry up you two!" Blaze shouted. "Or you guys will be left behind!"
"Hey!" Soul and Jason screamed in unison.
Soul and Jason ran to their group and continued on their journey. While they were walking they were talking about the usual stuff.
"I didn't know a sock could do so much things," Jason shivered.
"Forget the socks," Blaze insisted. "That pudding story was really creepy."
"Enough with the stories already!" Rose demanded. She was starting to get angry because all the boys were just acting like boys.
"Calm down Rose, okay?" Soul asked with a smile.
Rose started to blush from his smile. "Okay then Soul," Rose replied. She then turned her attention towards Blaze. "So Blaze I heard that you got a date with Maya this Saturday."
"What!" Hiro screamed with a confused look. "You actually got a date! And she isn't related to you!"
Blaze then punched Hiro for saying that. The group laughed at their actions.
"So what are you guys going to do," Jason smirked.
"Well I might take her to a movie," Blaze told the group. "And we might take a stroll around the park."
"Do you mean Shindo Park?" Hiro gasped.
"Yea," Blaze replied. "Why do you ask?"
"That spot is famous for their couples," Hiro explained. "It is said that new couples will kiss on their first date if it is at the park."
"Kissing!" Blaze screamed with his mouth half open.
"You are getting to that age," Hiro said.
"Blaze and Maya sitting in a tree," Soul and Jason sang. "K-I-S-S-I-N-G."
Blaze was about to go insane until Rose stopped him from killing Soul. Even though she wouldn't mind if he killed Jason, but he was actually important.
"Don't even think about it," Rose said. "They are not even worth it. Anyways are you going to kiss Maya?"
"Well I am not sure," Blaze replied.
"You should be passionate if you kiss her," Rose insisted while imagining the scene.
"Or you could kiss her by surprise," Soul smirked.
Soul smiled straight at Rose and she started to blush again.
"I get the point already," Blaze sighed. "It sounds like the two experts have kissed before."
Soul and Rose were startled by the comment. The two stood on the outside of the group away from each other and faced the other way. Both of their faces were blushing with redness.
"Awkward," Hiro whispered to Jason.
"Interesting," Jason smiled. He was starting to smile an evil smile. "So you guys kissed someone before."
"No!" Soul and Rose shouted at the same time.
"I heard rumor that you two kissed each other before," Jason snickered.
Soul and Rose started to even blush more at that comment.
"Are you serious?" Blaze said. "Who would have guessed?"
"That's enought guys," Soul demanded. "We are already at the place."
Soul pointed forward and the group saw a giant house. It wasn't a mansion, but it was bigger than your average house. The group started to walk again to the house.
"We actually made it to our destination!" Hiro screamed. "I can't wait to see the professor again."
"Just who is this professor?" Soul asked.
"The Professor is one of the most brilliant minds in The Game," Hiro explained. "He was one of the developers of The Game too."
"This guy seems awesome!" Blaze laughed.
Jason stopped right where he was standing. Everyone turned around and looked at him. He had this terrified look on his face.
"Jason what's wrong?" Rose wondered.
"L-l-look at the house," Jason stuttered.
Everyone turned around and looked at the house. Their faces were similar to Jason's. The professor's house was in ruins. Their was holes in the walls and pieces of wood on the ground. In front of the house was a familiar Scizor.
"Narred!" Hiro screamed. He ran to Narred and went by his side. "What happened here?"
Narred could barely keep himself awake. "They followed us....They followed us all the way here." Narred started to look around for his counterpart. "They attacked us when we weren't paying attention. And....They took 80-D and the professor."
The group was stunned at the news. The man they have been looking for has been kidnapped by the Ring Master and his goons. They were even more stunned that the leader of the rebellion was also taken away. Possibly this could be the end for them.

A meeting was happening in The Organization's main office. This meeting was about current events.
"So I heard you kidnapped Paul," Thorn Master said.
"Why yes I did," Ring Master laughed. "He was working with that rebellion."
"I still can't believe Paul went to their side," Mecha sighed.
"On the plus side we have obtained their leader," Ring Master snickered. He clapped his hands and an image of 80-D appeared. He was in an enclosed room with no door.
"Now the rebellion will be falling apart!" Moldybutt shouted. "I can finally have my revenge against those twerps."
"Let me contact my apprentice," Ring Master insisted. He pressed a button and an image of Darc appeared. "Hello Darc. How are things going down there."
"Excellent Master," Darc replied. "We have found a great number of rebels in the area."
"Good," Ring Master smiled. "Let me speak with him."
Darc nodded and moved out of the image. Then a Pokemon in a cloak walked into the image.
"Hello Master," the figure greeted. "You wanted to speak with me?"
"Who is this?" Thorn Master interrupted. "I didn't know about this person until now."
"Well he has been our source for information within the rebels," Ring Master replied. "I wanted to congradulate you for capturing them."
"It was my honor Master," the figure said. A pokemon ran up to the figure and the figure nodded after. "Master we just found some more rebels. We hvae to go now."
"Good luck," Ring Master waved goodbye.
The images then disappeared from the screen. Ring Master got up from his chair and walked to the door.
"If you excuse me I have to do an announcement," Ring master said.

On every broadcasting screen in The Game Ring Master appeard on it. He was smiling more than usual on the screen.
"Hello there players of The Game," Ring Master greeted. "As you know I am Ring Master the creator of The Game. Right now I have a special announcement I would like to make. It has recently caught our attention that a certain group of players have been getting into mischief." Below his screen appears a picture of Soul, Blaze, Jason, Adam, and everyone else associated with them. "These people have been trying to rebel against The Game. We do not like that in The Game. We have recently caught their leader known as Argorok or more commonly known as 80-D. They were trying to meet up with their accompliance Paul. Paul was one of The Game's developers and he was pretty darn good. He tracked them down, but we only captured 80-D and Paul. Getting on to the point I am going to issue a proposal. For anyone who captures one of these players they will recieve many amazing rewards. But the greatest satisfaction is to have a front row seat in watching them get deleted. So pleas try to find them and bring them to justice. Now I bid you a farewell."
Ring Master then disappeared from the screens. The players who were watching the screens were frozen for a moment. Then chaos broke loose. Everyone was rushing to the servers so they could find the outlaws. They wanted the reward that Ring Master announced. Now Soul, Blaze, and everyone else are going to have to expect millions of players attacking them and trying to bring them to "justice".

This chapter was pretty boring for me, but since I am busy I am getting less time to work on The Game. I an usually tired when I write them.
Quote:"You should be passionate if you kiss you,"
What? O_o

Anyway, cool new addition to the story. Keep it up!

*Is hoping to see Safyria, Jackal, and Renegade soon*
Don't worry in like two more chapters they will make an appearance.
Also be prepared to see a twilight reference.
"And....They took 80-D and the professor."

OH CRAP! THAT PROFESSOR GUY OWED ME A NICKEL!

Anyway, nice chapter, the only problem I have is Kudamon's in that Rose was telling Blaze how to kiss himself. However, I understand that no one is perfect. Interesting twist, taking my character away.
...I didn't notice that. XD
Yes I now it was an interesting twist. The next two chapter will be an even BIGGER TWIST!

Btw who enjoyed the ending where all of them are wanted criminals?
yeah, i liked that. pretty nice.
when are my characters comin in? curiousity.
BTW, I'M POSTING! IM SO HAPPY! XD
Who was that mystery man? Well I dunno. Can I change what happens with my char at the end?
^^ Okay just PM it to me. But I liked your other idea because I had the same one. XD
*finally reads it* Crap. This is gonna make things rather difficult on Charquil... at least he got the fame he wanted XD
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