28-08-2010, 11:34 AM
29-08-2010, 06:48 AM
Just wait Toby!
I am writing the next chapter right now and today is my only free day of the whole dang week. Also because someone(not naming) asked me about the sign up I have changed it a little.
This is the new sign up for The Game. If you already made a character then you don't have to worry.
I am writing the next chapter right now and today is my only free day of the whole dang week. Also because someone(not naming) asked me about the sign up I have changed it a little.
Spoiler:
Name: (Current Name)
Characters Name: (Name of character in real life and The Game)
Age/Gender:
Pokemon: (Which Pokemon are they? The Pokemon can evolve at a certain point. NO LEGENDARY POKEMON!)
Who's team are they on?: (A team is a group of people who want to fight other teams, explore new places, or just a social team. You could join any current teams if only it is acceptable because too much people are joining Soul!)
Bio: (Explain a little about the character's past/present.)
Appearance: (When do you want your character to be in the story or random.)
Relationship: (Do they have any relations with the current characters; real life and The Game)
Other:
Characters Name: (Name of character in real life and The Game)
Age/Gender:
Pokemon: (Which Pokemon are they? The Pokemon can evolve at a certain point. NO LEGENDARY POKEMON!)
Who's team are they on?: (A team is a group of people who want to fight other teams, explore new places, or just a social team. You could join any current teams if only it is acceptable because too much people are joining Soul!)
Bio: (Explain a little about the character's past/present.)
Appearance: (When do you want your character to be in the story or random.)
Relationship: (Do they have any relations with the current characters; real life and The Game)
Other:
This is the new sign up for The Game. If you already made a character then you don't have to worry.
13-09-2010, 12:29 PM
Well it has like two weeks since I last updated this thread.
Right now I am working on chapter 13 and I am only a quarter done. It is long so far and I am not sure if I should make a part 3. Here is an image so far.
![[Image: Sneakpeek.png]](http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww132/halofan808/Sneakpeek.png)
Probably by next week I will have it done!
Right now I am working on chapter 13 and I am only a quarter done. It is long so far and I am not sure if I should make a part 3. Here is an image so far.
Spoiler:
Probably by next week I will have it done!
13-09-2010, 08:49 PM
Just cannay wait for the whole thing. Just cannay.
14-09-2010, 01:03 AM
The Game is back and better! While I was gone I was planning some things with Kuda.... Well here is chapter 13.
Chapter 13: Date Night Part 2:
So many funny things in this chapter. :P
Chapter 13: Date Night Part 2:
Spoiler:
After the movie was over Maya was still dragging Blaze to somewhere.
"That movie was so long," Blaze shivered. "Two and a half hours long. And it was a romantic comedy too!"
"It was worth it," Maya smiled with shining eyes. She stared into his eyes. "Could we go to the park now?"
Oh no! Blaze thought. She is giving me those eyes.
In order to run away Blaze turned around and ran for it. Unfortunately, he ran into a sign that said "You just lost the Game". Blaze got knocked out by the impact and fell to the ground. Maya stared at Blaze and then smiled. She grabbed Blaze's hand and looked around. Then she started to run while dragging Blaze's body. Blaze was literally catching the dirt while being dragged. After running a mile or two they stopped and Blaze flew into sign that said "Watch out! Pudding is being eaten!"
"Ouch!" Blaze cried from pain. He looked around wondering where he was. "What just happened?"
"Nothing," Maya lied. "You said that you were going to take to the park and here we are."
"I knew that," Blaze laughed.
Blaze and Maya walked into the Ridgeway Park area. Since it was the weekend it was sort of crowded. They mostly saw couples there making and the two of them would usually look away from each other and blush. Suddenly, Maya stopped by a statue and turned around to face Blaze. She smiled at him and sat down on a bench.
"Today has been fun," Maya said with a smile. Her smile then turned sad. "I wish this day could last forever."
Blaze looked stunned at her comment. She wanted this day to be special.
Blaze put his arm around Maya and smiled at her. Maya stared at Blaze and smiled back at him. She lay her head into his chest and closed her eyes. Blaze looked at her again and smiled.
This is Freakin' awesome! Blaze thought. Behind him some bushes were moving and some whispering could be heard. What the? He nudged Maya causing her to wake up. "We have to move." Blaze whispered. "Someone is behind us."
Maya got off Blaze and jumped off the bench. Blaze followed her and they ran to the statue.
"Show yourselves!" Blaze screamed at the stalkers.
Two teenage boys came out from the trees. The taller one had brown hair and black sunglasses that was blocking his eyes. He was wearing a black shirt that said "You have been Haked!". The shorter boy had white hair and blue eyes. He had a serious look on his face and was wearing a blue long-sleeved shirt. The two of them jumped over the bench and landed by Blaze and Maya.
"So this is Infernus?" the taller one asked. "As the information says he is one of the stronger rebels."
"Don't worry," the shorter one reassured. "There is only one of him and two of us. Plus his girlfriend is here and he will be protecting her."
"That reminds me Snow, I have a date tonight," Hak remembered. "We better finish this quickly."
"Wait a second," Blaze said. "Hak and Snow?"
"Aren't these the guys that we rescued from Alakatraz?" Maya asked. "Why are they attacking us?"
"Don't worry guys," Snow smiled. "This is nothing personal. It is just business."
"You see we were hired by some people and they want you gone," Hak explained. "They said with you gone their plans will go by smoothly. Should we do it now Snow?"
Snow nodded at Hak and Hak smiled back. Hak took out a cell phone and started to push some buttons.
"Are you ready Blaze?" Hak laughed. He held the cell phone out and smiled. "Game on and set! Let the games begin Blaze."
Hak got lifted into the air and particles of his body started to reconfigure itself. His body grew in size and his limbs became tentacle-like. His head went from black to blue and then he started to glow a bright light. Blaze and Maya looked away while Snow stared right at him.
"My eyes!" Snow screamed. He put his hands over his eyes. "They burn!"
Hak stopped glowing revealing his new form. He had transformed into a Tentacruel. Hak lowered his new body to the ground and landed by Snow. He was standing on the ground using his tentacles as feet. Blaze and Maya were still shocked from the transformation.
"Sorry about the eyes Snow?" Hak laughed. "I can't control the glowing things yet."
"I'm okay," Snow replied. "I can't still see that well in my left eye, but I can still see."
Blaze stared at the pokemon and teenage boy arguing before him. This isn't something you see everybody. Blaze thought. Blaze examined the Tentacruel in front of him. "Wait a second." Blaze said. "Weren't you a Tentacool just a few days ago?"
"Well after that fiasco I did a bit of battling," Hak explained. "Eventually after a while I got the option to evolve and I took it. Now I am an even bigger tentacle monster." Hak started to laugh with his tentacles in the air causing him to fall. "Ouch!"
"I hate tentacles!" Maya screamed. She hid behind Blaze. "They are so icky and they slither around."
"I know how you feel," Snow sighed. His comment got him a hit in the head. "I deserved that." Snow took out a phone that was similar to Hak's. "It's my turn." He lifter the phone into the sky. "Game on!"
Snow's body flew into the air just like Hak's. His body started to reconfigure itself. His body turned to a dark blue-ish color and his hair turned red. Snow's hands turned talon-like too. Out of the blue, snow started to envelope Snow and it formed a ball. Suddenly, the snow ball exploded and a Sneasel appeared out of it.
"A fancy entrance as usual Snow," Hak commented. A ball of snow hit him in the face. "Is this payback?"
"Maybe," Snow answered back. Snow turned to face Blaze. "Now that we are in our Game forms you won't be able to stop us. You better give up now or you and your girlfriend will be harmed."
He is right. Blaze thought. If we even try to fight them it will be hopeless. I better take Maya and run.
Blaze grabbed Maya's hand and walked took a step back. It looked like Hak and Snow were about to charge them, but something happened. Maya let go of Blaze's hand and pointed at the two attackers.
"No way I am going to run away!" Maya shouted. "I'd rather die than run away from cowards like you!"
"You asked for it missy!" Hak replied with anger.
Hak charged Maya with his tentacles facing her. She flinched a little, but she remained in her spot. She turned around and smiled at Blaze. Blaze saw her smile and ran in front of her. He was willing to sacrifice his life for her. Hak was about to lunge his tentacles at them until a stick flew at him and poked him in the eye.
"My eye!" Hak screamed in agony. He fell right on the spot barely one feet away from Blaze and Maya. He put one of his tentacles over his eye. "Who threw that? Show yourself now!"
Some of the bushes started to rustled and out came a red-haired boy. He appeared to be the same age as Blaze or maybe even older. He was wearing a black jacket and some headphones around his neck. He had a serious look on his face. He stared at the four people in front of him and smiled.
"It can't be," Hak hissed. "Why are you here?"
"Can't a friend drop by?" the red-haired boy asked. "Plus I prefer to be called Charquil than 'you' you know."
Soul and Rose walked around the mall some more until Soul couldn't walk no more. Soul was carrying four bags of stuff that Rose bought. They found a bench near them and sat down. Soul was glad to finally sit down.
"I'm exhausted!" Soul cried. "I don't think I can move anymore." Soul tried to move his arms, but they fell back down.
Rose started to laugh at him. "Well I think that's everything I need," Rose laughed. She stretched her arms and smiled. "I wonder what Blaze and Maya are doing?"
"If I know Blaze he will be talking about either sports or video games," Soul answered with a snicker.
"That's probably true," Rose laughed at Soul's jokes. "At least we can guess that they are having fun."
"Or they could be captured by Hak and Snow," a mysterious voice stated.
Soul and Rose turned to see who talked. It was none other than Safyria. Behind Safyria was a tall black teenage boy and a European boy around her height. The three of them walked up to Soul.
"What are you doing here Safyria?" Soul asked.
"Well I am here for my task," Safyria stated.
"And our task at hand involves you Soul," the black teen said. "It is too-
"Wait a second Jackal," the European boy interrupted. "You are saying too much as usual."
"Are you saying that I talk too much Renegade?" Jackal said in a pissed off voice.
"Wait if I am Jackal?" Renegade grinned. "What will you do about it?"
While Renegade and Jackal were arguing Soul and Rose were quietly staring at them.
"I'm confused," Rose said. "What are you guys doing here?"
"Since this two are idiots would probably say it anyway I'll tell you," Safyria sighed. "All over The Game you and your friends have been marked as criminals. Whoever turns you guys in will get a reward and those people will be us."
"No one is stronger or better than us," Renegade laughed.
"We are team that has no bounds and we shall become te best," Jackal smiled.
"For we are the one and only," Safyria paused.
The three of them quickly moved into a spot and did a pose. Soul and Rose were sort of freaked out by it.
"Team Eclipse!" the three of them shouted.
Soul and Rose looked at the group of three with a what-just-happened look. They didn't notice it, but they attracted a crowd. Some of the bystanders had the same expression as Soul and Rose. Finally one of the bystanders did a facepalm.
"Team Eclipse?" the bystander asked. The Bystander started to laugh at their name. "Are you guys Twilight Fans or what?"
"No!" Renegade answered. "Who would even like Twilight? It's made up of-"
Suddenly a bunch of fan girls came out of the crowd and dragged Renegade to somewhere.
"Help me!" Renegade begged.
"Anyone who doesn't like Twilight is an enemy," Safyria smiled.
Safyria gave a thumbs up to the fan girls and they disappeared. Jackal was starting to look scared. He backed away slowly, but Safyria turned around and looked at him.
"Where are you going Jackal?" Safyria asked. She walked forward to Jackal. "We still need to capture Soul."
"Okay then," Jackal sighed with regret. "But don't we need Renegade?"
Suddenly, Darren appeared swinging on a vine while holding somebody. The somebody he was carrying was Renegade. His shirt was torn and he had scratches all over his body. The two of them were heading in the group's direction. Unfortunately, the vine broke as soon as they made it to the group. They crash landed straight into a strange man wearing speedos that was eating a burrito. The man fell to the ground with the two on him and dropped his burrito.
"My burrito!" the man screamed.
"My spleen!" Renegade cried.
"Monkey butt!" Darren laughed.
Renegade and the man gave Darren a weird look and did a facepalm at the same time. The man pushed pushed Darren and Renegade off him and grabbed his burrito. Then he ran away from the two of them. Darren got up and ran after the man.
"Get back here!" Darren demanded.
"Renegade!" Safyria shouted. "Get over here!"
Renegade nodded and ran over to his teammates.
"Let's start the plan," Safyria whispered to the two.
Jackal and Renegade nod at the same time. Safyria reaches into her pocket and takes out a cell phone.
"A cell phone?" Maya asked. "Who are you going call? Your boyfriend?"
Safyria was starting to blush. "I-I don't have a boyfriend!" She replied. "Besides who would want to go out with me?"
Jackal turned around and his face turned a little red. He didn't want them to see his face. During the girls' conversation Soul and Renegade were talking about Pokemon. Then Safyria lifted the phone in the air and everyone stopped talking.
"Okay I've had enough!" Safyria screamed. "Now let the game begin!"
She was about to push a button on her phone until a stick came out of nowhere and speared through her phone. The phone went straight into the wall barely missing some bystanders. Everyone looked to where the stick came from and saw a hooded figure. The figure walked closer to the group.
"Who is you!" Darren screamed before getting brick'd.
"A brick?" Soul said. "Only one person uses bricks. And that is Santa Claus!" Soul got brick'd too.
The hooded figure revealed himself and he was Jason. "Why would I Santa?" Jason asked. "Doesn't he eat little kids? I only eat noobs."
"Hello there older brother," Safyria greeted. "What are you doing here?"
"Well first of all I am not your older brother, we are twins." Jason explained. He lifted up a phone and put it in front of his body. "And I am here to stop you!"
Jason was about to push a button on his phone, but Darren slapped Jason in the face.
"What was that for Darren!" Jason shouted.
"I need to say two things!" Darren replied.
"What!?"
"Well the chapter is about to end now!"
"What cha-!"
"And that the readers just lost the game!"
Darren got hit by a brick that Jason threw. Darren was sent flying into a yogurt machine which he was swimming in.
"DON'T BREAK THE FOURT-! Gah I did it too!"
"That movie was so long," Blaze shivered. "Two and a half hours long. And it was a romantic comedy too!"
"It was worth it," Maya smiled with shining eyes. She stared into his eyes. "Could we go to the park now?"
Oh no! Blaze thought. She is giving me those eyes.
In order to run away Blaze turned around and ran for it. Unfortunately, he ran into a sign that said "You just lost the Game". Blaze got knocked out by the impact and fell to the ground. Maya stared at Blaze and then smiled. She grabbed Blaze's hand and looked around. Then she started to run while dragging Blaze's body. Blaze was literally catching the dirt while being dragged. After running a mile or two they stopped and Blaze flew into sign that said "Watch out! Pudding is being eaten!"
"Ouch!" Blaze cried from pain. He looked around wondering where he was. "What just happened?"
"Nothing," Maya lied. "You said that you were going to take to the park and here we are."
"I knew that," Blaze laughed.
Blaze and Maya walked into the Ridgeway Park area. Since it was the weekend it was sort of crowded. They mostly saw couples there making and the two of them would usually look away from each other and blush. Suddenly, Maya stopped by a statue and turned around to face Blaze. She smiled at him and sat down on a bench.
"Today has been fun," Maya said with a smile. Her smile then turned sad. "I wish this day could last forever."
Blaze looked stunned at her comment. She wanted this day to be special.
Blaze put his arm around Maya and smiled at her. Maya stared at Blaze and smiled back at him. She lay her head into his chest and closed her eyes. Blaze looked at her again and smiled.
This is Freakin' awesome! Blaze thought. Behind him some bushes were moving and some whispering could be heard. What the? He nudged Maya causing her to wake up. "We have to move." Blaze whispered. "Someone is behind us."
Maya got off Blaze and jumped off the bench. Blaze followed her and they ran to the statue.
"Show yourselves!" Blaze screamed at the stalkers.
Two teenage boys came out from the trees. The taller one had brown hair and black sunglasses that was blocking his eyes. He was wearing a black shirt that said "You have been Haked!". The shorter boy had white hair and blue eyes. He had a serious look on his face and was wearing a blue long-sleeved shirt. The two of them jumped over the bench and landed by Blaze and Maya.
"So this is Infernus?" the taller one asked. "As the information says he is one of the stronger rebels."
"Don't worry," the shorter one reassured. "There is only one of him and two of us. Plus his girlfriend is here and he will be protecting her."
"That reminds me Snow, I have a date tonight," Hak remembered. "We better finish this quickly."
"Wait a second," Blaze said. "Hak and Snow?"
"Aren't these the guys that we rescued from Alakatraz?" Maya asked. "Why are they attacking us?"
"Don't worry guys," Snow smiled. "This is nothing personal. It is just business."
"You see we were hired by some people and they want you gone," Hak explained. "They said with you gone their plans will go by smoothly. Should we do it now Snow?"
Snow nodded at Hak and Hak smiled back. Hak took out a cell phone and started to push some buttons.
"Are you ready Blaze?" Hak laughed. He held the cell phone out and smiled. "Game on and set! Let the games begin Blaze."
Hak got lifted into the air and particles of his body started to reconfigure itself. His body grew in size and his limbs became tentacle-like. His head went from black to blue and then he started to glow a bright light. Blaze and Maya looked away while Snow stared right at him.
"My eyes!" Snow screamed. He put his hands over his eyes. "They burn!"
Hak stopped glowing revealing his new form. He had transformed into a Tentacruel. Hak lowered his new body to the ground and landed by Snow. He was standing on the ground using his tentacles as feet. Blaze and Maya were still shocked from the transformation.
"Sorry about the eyes Snow?" Hak laughed. "I can't control the glowing things yet."
"I'm okay," Snow replied. "I can't still see that well in my left eye, but I can still see."
Blaze stared at the pokemon and teenage boy arguing before him. This isn't something you see everybody. Blaze thought. Blaze examined the Tentacruel in front of him. "Wait a second." Blaze said. "Weren't you a Tentacool just a few days ago?"
"Well after that fiasco I did a bit of battling," Hak explained. "Eventually after a while I got the option to evolve and I took it. Now I am an even bigger tentacle monster." Hak started to laugh with his tentacles in the air causing him to fall. "Ouch!"
"I hate tentacles!" Maya screamed. She hid behind Blaze. "They are so icky and they slither around."
"I know how you feel," Snow sighed. His comment got him a hit in the head. "I deserved that." Snow took out a phone that was similar to Hak's. "It's my turn." He lifter the phone into the sky. "Game on!"
Snow's body flew into the air just like Hak's. His body started to reconfigure itself. His body turned to a dark blue-ish color and his hair turned red. Snow's hands turned talon-like too. Out of the blue, snow started to envelope Snow and it formed a ball. Suddenly, the snow ball exploded and a Sneasel appeared out of it.
"A fancy entrance as usual Snow," Hak commented. A ball of snow hit him in the face. "Is this payback?"
"Maybe," Snow answered back. Snow turned to face Blaze. "Now that we are in our Game forms you won't be able to stop us. You better give up now or you and your girlfriend will be harmed."
He is right. Blaze thought. If we even try to fight them it will be hopeless. I better take Maya and run.
Blaze grabbed Maya's hand and walked took a step back. It looked like Hak and Snow were about to charge them, but something happened. Maya let go of Blaze's hand and pointed at the two attackers.
"No way I am going to run away!" Maya shouted. "I'd rather die than run away from cowards like you!"
"You asked for it missy!" Hak replied with anger.
Hak charged Maya with his tentacles facing her. She flinched a little, but she remained in her spot. She turned around and smiled at Blaze. Blaze saw her smile and ran in front of her. He was willing to sacrifice his life for her. Hak was about to lunge his tentacles at them until a stick flew at him and poked him in the eye.
"My eye!" Hak screamed in agony. He fell right on the spot barely one feet away from Blaze and Maya. He put one of his tentacles over his eye. "Who threw that? Show yourself now!"
Some of the bushes started to rustled and out came a red-haired boy. He appeared to be the same age as Blaze or maybe even older. He was wearing a black jacket and some headphones around his neck. He had a serious look on his face. He stared at the four people in front of him and smiled.
"It can't be," Hak hissed. "Why are you here?"
"Can't a friend drop by?" the red-haired boy asked. "Plus I prefer to be called Charquil than 'you' you know."
Soul and Rose walked around the mall some more until Soul couldn't walk no more. Soul was carrying four bags of stuff that Rose bought. They found a bench near them and sat down. Soul was glad to finally sit down.
"I'm exhausted!" Soul cried. "I don't think I can move anymore." Soul tried to move his arms, but they fell back down.
Rose started to laugh at him. "Well I think that's everything I need," Rose laughed. She stretched her arms and smiled. "I wonder what Blaze and Maya are doing?"
"If I know Blaze he will be talking about either sports or video games," Soul answered with a snicker.
"That's probably true," Rose laughed at Soul's jokes. "At least we can guess that they are having fun."
"Or they could be captured by Hak and Snow," a mysterious voice stated.
Soul and Rose turned to see who talked. It was none other than Safyria. Behind Safyria was a tall black teenage boy and a European boy around her height. The three of them walked up to Soul.
"What are you doing here Safyria?" Soul asked.
"Well I am here for my task," Safyria stated.
"And our task at hand involves you Soul," the black teen said. "It is too-
"Wait a second Jackal," the European boy interrupted. "You are saying too much as usual."
"Are you saying that I talk too much Renegade?" Jackal said in a pissed off voice.
"Wait if I am Jackal?" Renegade grinned. "What will you do about it?"
While Renegade and Jackal were arguing Soul and Rose were quietly staring at them.
"I'm confused," Rose said. "What are you guys doing here?"
"Since this two are idiots would probably say it anyway I'll tell you," Safyria sighed. "All over The Game you and your friends have been marked as criminals. Whoever turns you guys in will get a reward and those people will be us."
"No one is stronger or better than us," Renegade laughed.
"We are team that has no bounds and we shall become te best," Jackal smiled.
"For we are the one and only," Safyria paused.
The three of them quickly moved into a spot and did a pose. Soul and Rose were sort of freaked out by it.
"Team Eclipse!" the three of them shouted.
Soul and Rose looked at the group of three with a what-just-happened look. They didn't notice it, but they attracted a crowd. Some of the bystanders had the same expression as Soul and Rose. Finally one of the bystanders did a facepalm.
"Team Eclipse?" the bystander asked. The Bystander started to laugh at their name. "Are you guys Twilight Fans or what?"
"No!" Renegade answered. "Who would even like Twilight? It's made up of-"
Suddenly a bunch of fan girls came out of the crowd and dragged Renegade to somewhere.
"Help me!" Renegade begged.
"Anyone who doesn't like Twilight is an enemy," Safyria smiled.
Safyria gave a thumbs up to the fan girls and they disappeared. Jackal was starting to look scared. He backed away slowly, but Safyria turned around and looked at him.
"Where are you going Jackal?" Safyria asked. She walked forward to Jackal. "We still need to capture Soul."
"Okay then," Jackal sighed with regret. "But don't we need Renegade?"
Suddenly, Darren appeared swinging on a vine while holding somebody. The somebody he was carrying was Renegade. His shirt was torn and he had scratches all over his body. The two of them were heading in the group's direction. Unfortunately, the vine broke as soon as they made it to the group. They crash landed straight into a strange man wearing speedos that was eating a burrito. The man fell to the ground with the two on him and dropped his burrito.
"My burrito!" the man screamed.
"My spleen!" Renegade cried.
"Monkey butt!" Darren laughed.
Renegade and the man gave Darren a weird look and did a facepalm at the same time. The man pushed pushed Darren and Renegade off him and grabbed his burrito. Then he ran away from the two of them. Darren got up and ran after the man.
"Get back here!" Darren demanded.
"Renegade!" Safyria shouted. "Get over here!"
Renegade nodded and ran over to his teammates.
"Let's start the plan," Safyria whispered to the two.
Jackal and Renegade nod at the same time. Safyria reaches into her pocket and takes out a cell phone.
"A cell phone?" Maya asked. "Who are you going call? Your boyfriend?"
Safyria was starting to blush. "I-I don't have a boyfriend!" She replied. "Besides who would want to go out with me?"
Jackal turned around and his face turned a little red. He didn't want them to see his face. During the girls' conversation Soul and Renegade were talking about Pokemon. Then Safyria lifted the phone in the air and everyone stopped talking.
"Okay I've had enough!" Safyria screamed. "Now let the game begin!"
She was about to push a button on her phone until a stick came out of nowhere and speared through her phone. The phone went straight into the wall barely missing some bystanders. Everyone looked to where the stick came from and saw a hooded figure. The figure walked closer to the group.
"Who is you!" Darren screamed before getting brick'd.
"A brick?" Soul said. "Only one person uses bricks. And that is Santa Claus!" Soul got brick'd too.
The hooded figure revealed himself and he was Jason. "Why would I Santa?" Jason asked. "Doesn't he eat little kids? I only eat noobs."
"Hello there older brother," Safyria greeted. "What are you doing here?"
"Well first of all I am not your older brother, we are twins." Jason explained. He lifted up a phone and put it in front of his body. "And I am here to stop you!"
Jason was about to push a button on his phone, but Darren slapped Jason in the face.
"What was that for Darren!" Jason shouted.
"I need to say two things!" Darren replied.
"What!?"
"Well the chapter is about to end now!"
"What cha-!"
"And that the readers just lost the game!"
Darren got hit by a brick that Jason threw. Darren was sent flying into a yogurt machine which he was swimming in.
"DON'T BREAK THE FOURT-! Gah I did it too!"
So many funny things in this chapter. :P
14-09-2010, 03:34 AM
Nice work. Took you a while to get back to this. Keep it up.
14-09-2010, 04:10 AM
I loved the part where the fan girls attacked Renegade. I bet Kuda enjoyed that since he is a Twilight fan.
14-09-2010, 04:43 AM
Indeed, Fallen, indeed.
Love the part with Saf and Jack～
Love the part with Saf and Jack～
15-09-2010, 10:55 AM
i want to be in The Game plz
Name:Misticlugia
Characters Name:Mistic
Age:14
Gender:female
Pokemon:a lugia wearing silver and black headphones
Who's team are they on?:leader of team oceanblaze
Bio:.......
Appearance: random
Relationship:none
Other: goes nuts when chocolate is mentioned
...... a little wierd but still........ppppplllllllzzzzz
Name:Misticlugia
Characters Name:Mistic
Age:14
Gender:female
Pokemon:a lugia wearing silver and black headphones
Who's team are they on?:leader of team oceanblaze
Bio:.......
Appearance: random
Relationship:none
Other: goes nuts when chocolate is mentioned
...... a little wierd but still........ppppplllllllzzzzz
15-09-2010, 11:35 AM
PM this please do not post it here. Also no legendary pokemon as characters. I think I mentioned I will check later. Only certain people can have legendary.