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Chapter 4 is here. This a pretty funny chapter yet romantic. The best part is NO CHARQUIL!:o Just kidding!

Chapter 4-Girls and Guys
Spoiler:
At the dead of night many things can happen. Someone's house could be on fire! Or someone could be robbed! Or an old man could be passed out on the toilet.... Getting back to this story.

After Soul logged out of the game he sees a shadow behind him. When he saw the person it was worse than a 1000 Tauros stepping on your....Pokeballs. The evil threat in front of him was his...sister? She was standing in the middle of his room with a towel around her. And...*inappropriate for children under the age of 13*. I hope I don't get fired as narrator.
"What are you doing here?" asked Soul. "And why do you only have a towel?!"
Soul's sister sits on his bed, "Well I just got back from Japan and when I got home you weren't home. I thought that you were out with your friends. So I took a long, hot shower and when I went into your room again you were on your computer."
"That's all you say right?" asked Soul.
"What do you mean?" said Soul's sister. "Does that mean you have naughty stuff in your room?" Her face had a really big grin.
Soul's face turned red with frustration, "I don't have any of those in my room! Get out of my room, Sara!"
Sara got up and ran straight for Soul, "Only if you give me a big kiss and say you love me!" While she was running she tripped on a book and went straight for Soul. She landed straight on Soul and he was drowned by her chest. Soul had a moment after that. In his head he saw pictures from when he was a baby to childhood to now. He thought that he was going to die.
I am not sure if this is a curse or a blessing from God Soul thought while he was struggling to breath.
Sara got up and checked if Soul was okay, "Soul are you alive? If you are not breathing I'll give you CPR."
As Soul was losing consciousness he said his last words, "No...Brother...Complex..I'd....rather....die.." At the word die he passed out. His nose started to bleed.

The next morning Soul woke up. He was on his bed and he was still alive. On the ground by his bed was a pool of blood.
"I am still alive," said Soul. "But I lost a lot of blood last night."
Soul turned to his right and he saw Sara sleeping right next to him. She was half-dressed with only undergarments. Soul's nose starts to bleed again. He plugs his nose up with tissues to stop the blood.
Soul taps on the back until she is awake, "Why are you in my bed?"
"I was scared last night," said Sara. "So I walked into your room and slept by you. I also wanted to sleep with you."
Soul's face turned to stone and then he finally spoke, "I have to go to school soon. Don't do anything weird when I get home."
"This isn't weird," stated Sara. "This is Love."
At the word love Soul picked up his bag and jumped out the window. He broke his fall by landing on his bag. Unfortunately he was a big textbook in it and it hurt a lot.

Soul finally arrives at school. Right at the front gate is Blaze waiting for him.
"Took you long enough," implied Blaze.
"Sorry something happened," said Soul. "My home isn't safe anymore. This crazy woman a.k.a. my sister returned home last night. Then she fell on me and suffocated me with her enormous boobs. When I woke up she was sleeping right next to me half-dressed. Did I mention she has a brother complex?"
Blaze is left silent. He puts his hand on Soul's shoulder, "Your life is really screwed up."
"Hahaha," laughed someone.
Soul and Blaze look in a tree and see a teenage boy on it. He has a twig in his mouth and he is casually sitting down.
"If it isn't Jason," said Blaze.
"Hi Jason," greeted Soul.
The boy known as Jason jumped out of the tree and landed in front of them, "How's life been Soul, Blaze. I couldn't resist eavesdropping on you conversation. It sounds like Soul here has a screwed up life."
"I thought the exact same thing," laughed Blaze.
Soul starts to get mad and tries to punch Jason. Jason immediately responds by throwing a twig at Soul. As the result, some of Soul's hair falls off.
"Don't even think about picking a fight with me," said Jason. "I am too strong for you. I am the captain of the baseball team and a member of the football team.
Blaze turns around and walks away, "Come on Soul. We are going to be late for class."
Soul runs to catch up with Blaze. The bell starts to ring and the two of them run for it. Jason is just standing their looking at his phone. He starts to dial a number and calls.
"Hey it's me," said Jason. "The targets are in sight."
"Good," said person on the phone.
As Blaze and Soul enter the classroom they stop. Half of the chairs are empty. The teacher looks at them.
"Sorry we are late Mr. Nishimura," said Soul.
"It's okay," replied Mr. Nishimura. "I thought you guys were absent like everyone else. Please take your seats now."
Soul and Blaze walk towards their seats and sit down. They notice that Rose and Hiro aren't here either.
"Hiro and Rose too?" whispered Blaze.
"I wonder what happened to everyone," replied Soul.
After the class is done some of the students went home. Only a few stayed in the classroom. Soul and Blaze were sitting down in their seats.
"Maybe they are playing The Game," insisted Blaze.
"That could be true," said Soul.
"Okay then it is settled. We will look for Hiro and Rose!"
"And everyone else."
Soul and Blaze start to laugh out loud. After they are down laughing a girl walks to Blaze. She has short brown hair and green eyes. She has a red ribbon in her hair.
"Hi Maya," greeted Blaze.
"I will be outside Blaze," said Soul.
Soul left the classroom.
"Um...Hi...Blaze," said Maya with a red, blushing face.
"Do you need something?" asked Blaze.
"No i don't need anything," replied Maya.
"Then I will be going," said Blaze.
Blaze starts to walk away, but Maya pulls on his shirt.
"Would you like to go to the carnival with me?!" shouted Maya. She starts to cry.
The classroom was empty so no one hear or see her.
Blaze just stares at her. He finally speaks up, "What time should I be there?"
Maya wipes her tears and looks at Blaze with a smiling face, "How about 10 a.m. this Saturday?"
"Sounds good to me," replied Blaze.
Both of them walk towards the door together. Maya puts her arm around Blaze's arm and both of them start to blush. When they exit the classroom they see Soul with a blank expression just staring. They look at their arms and pull away. Maya runs off. Blaze has a sad look in his face.
Maya turns around, "I'll see you Saturday!"
Blaze looks at her and gives her a thumbs up. She runs off. Blaze looks at Soul and then he is afraid. Soul is giving him an I-am-going-to-kill-you-for-getting-a-girlfriend-before-me stare. Blaze starts to run away and Soul chases him. As they run out of the building they are being watched. Jason is on the roof looking at Blaze and Soul.
"The plan is about to begin," said Jason. He starts to laugh with a grin in his face.
Blaze and Soul finally stop and head back to the school gate. They punch each other in the face and start to laugh after.
"So we ready to find Hiro and Rose?" asked Soul.
"Yea I'm ready." replied Blaze. He looked happier than usual.
Soul puts his hand on Blaze's shoulder, "Good luck with Saturday. This might be your only date in a long time." He walks away and goes home.
Blaze just stands there trying to think about what Soul said. When he finally gets it he starts to get angry and through the school gate to find Soul. He looks everywhere, but he can't find Soul. So he gives up and walks home.

Soul finally arrives at his house. When he opens the door and walks in something jumps on him. It is his sister, Sara. She is all dressed up in formal attire.
Soul pushes Sara off of him and jumps up, "I knew this was going to happen. Why are you all dressed up."
"I just got back from a date," stated Sara.
"You had a date," said Soul. "That's hard to believe."
"Well it's true!" shouted Sara. She turns around. "It's not like you never had a date before."
Sara doesn't hear Soul say anything so she turns around. Soul is still and his head is down.
Soul starts walking up the stairs, "I will be in my room." Then a door is heard being slammed.
Sara looks at the stairs. Then she walks into the kitchen and gets a coke.
"Looks like I should start now," said Sara.

Soul is on his bed looking at the ceiling. He is thinking about his life.
"Where are they?" asked Soul.
He closes his eyes and thinks about his friends. Rose's image comes in his head. He immediately gets up.
"I have to find her. Then I will know."
Soul goes by his computer and turns it on. He clicks on The Game. He enters his data and clicks enter. He gets scanned and he disappears. His door was open and Sara saw the whole thing.
"So he is one of The Game players," said Sara.
She stares at Soul's computer. The she grabs a bracelet from her pocket. She puts it on her arm.
"Game on," said Sara.
After those words a portal formed below Sara and she gets sucked in.

Soul appears on a roof of a building. He doesn't know where he is. Just then a portal opens and two Pokemon appear. One is a Grovyle with a twig in it's mouth and a belt with mini bricks attached to it. The other is a Lopunny with a giant fan on it's back.
"Hello Soul," greeted the Grovyle with a familiar voice.
"You look confused," said the Lopunny with another familiar voice. "Do you want me to make you feel better?"
Soul takes a few steps back, "Jason? Sara?"
The door behind the two pokemon open and another pokemon comes out. The pokemon is a Kirlia. The Kirlia has pink hair and a small doll in it's hand.
"Looks like you know who they are," stated the Kirlia.
Soul looks at the Kirlia with disbelief, "Is that you Rose?"
"Yes it is, Soul."
Soul then collapses. All three of them rush to his aid. The shock of seeing them like this must have been too much.

In a dark room in a black building are 7 chairs and a huge table in front of it. Only two of the chairs were occupied by Pokemon. One of the chairs was levitating and the Pokemon on it was a Mewtwo. The Mewtwo had red eyes and it had spoons all around him. A name was on the table in front and it said, "Ring Master". The other chair had a weapons on the side of it and a Lucario was occupying it. This was the same Lucario that was watching Soul. It's name was Darc.
"Master I wish to learn more about the Dark Arts!" demanded Darc.
"Don't worry my apprentice," said Ring Master. "I will teach you."
Ring Master got out of his chair and walked towards the window. He looks through and sees a Pichu appear on a roof of a building. Then a Grovyle and Lopbunny appear and a Kirlia afterward.
"Our plan is a step closer now," said Ring Master. "Then when it is done we shall rule the world!" He starts to laugh an evil laugh.
The sister parts were kind of unnecessary... otherwise it was good.
I wasn't in it...
Sorry about the sister parts, and you not being in it.
Well since he has a sister I was trying to make it so she has a brother complex(loving her brother TOO MUCH). So I tried to incorporate that.

Besides that Kudamon got his wish. He got an epic entrance. xD

EDIT:
Also the sister(Sara) might move back to America

Trivia:
Spoiler:
Rose, Jason, and Sara knew each other before Soul switched schools.

Blaze got his first date...FAIL
Soul never got a date.....BIGGER FAIL
Quote:One is a Grovyle with a twig in it's mouth and a belt with mini bricks attached to it.
That by itself is epic. XD

Awesome chapter, but the sister thing is a bit much. Also...

Quote:"Don't even think about picking a fight with me," said Jason. "I am too strong for you. I am the captain of the baseball team and a member of the football team.
Not exactly what I had in mind...
It's good, I gue

Wait.

CRAP, I JUST LOST THE GAME
(08-06-2010 12:10 AM)Kudamon Wrote: [ -> ]
Quote:One is a Grovyle with a twig in it's mouth and a belt with mini bricks attached to it.
That by itself is epic. XD

Awesome chapter, but the sister thing is a bit much. Also...

It is epic :D
Well I know the sister thing is too much so I will make it less ....intense. :blink:

(08-06-2010 02:51 AM)Kam Wrote: [ -> ]CRAP, I JUST LOST THE GAME

Is this even necessary...

Well I will start the next chapter soon, but I just started Summer School and I will be busy

UPDATE
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Sorry for the Double post... Again I think...

Sorry I haven't updated The Game recently, but I have been busy with School and Band. If anyone (Charquil) would like to make a chapter message me and I will tell you "stuff"

Here is the EPIC chapter 5

Chapter 5-Save our Soul
Spoiler:
Soon after Soul passed out a Grovyle caught him. A Lopunny and Kirlia rushed to see if he was okay. Soul was still breathing. He just passed out.
"It looks like he is out cold," stated the Grovyle. "I say it is Rose's fault."
"I agree with Jason," said the Lopunny. "My sweet, little brother is now unconscious."
The Kirlia known as Rose starts to blush, "Stop treating Soul like that! You always do weird things to Soul, Sara! I can't stand it!"
"You are just jealous that I get to see Soul everyday. You only get to see him during school hours."
Rose starts to blush even more, "I am .."
Jason just stares at them while they are fighting. He looks down at Soul who is on the ground.
"You are one lucky dude," stated Jason.
He grabs Soul and throws him over his shoulder. He walks towards the girls and pulls them apart.
"Stop fighting already!" demanded Jason. "We have a job to do!"
"Okay then," said Rose and Sara simultaneously.
They go near the edge of the roof and jump off the ledge. They land on the sidewalk in front of the building. Jason accidentally let go of Soul while he jumped down, but caught him before he landed. Rose and Sara were giving him a you-are-lucky-that-you-caught-him stare. Coincidentally, Doom was walking around in that district and saw them jump down. The three of them run deeper into the Old City District. Doom follows them without them knowing. After following them for a while, they walk into this rundown building. Doom gets a good look at the building and heads back to tell the team.

Blaze and Charquil are sparring. Magma, Burst, and Pegasus are playing cards.
"Got any twos?" asked Pegasus.
"Goldfish," said Burst.
Magby throws his cards on the ground, "This is so boring! I want to do something exciting!"
Blaze and Charquil stop sparring and walk towards the rest of the team.
"Don't worry Magma," said Charquil. "Something exciting might happen soon."
"It might even be behind the corner," stated Blaze.
After Blaze's sentence Doom appeared from behind the corner.
"Guys we have a problem!" shouted Doom. "It's Soul.
Immediately everyone got up and ran to Doom.
"What happened to Soul," demanded Blaze.
Doom told them what happened. After telling them the story Blaze had a plan.
"Okay then," said Blaze. "We are going to get Soul back."
"That's one good plan," said Charquil. "But who is going to save him. We can't all go in."
"That's why it's going only to be me and you."
"Hold on a moment!" screamed Magma. "You guys can't go by yourselves! I'm going too."
"Magma has a point," agreed Doom. "I shall accompany you as well. I am the only one that knows where the building is."
"Whatever," said Blaze. He looks at Burst and Pegasus. "You guys stay here and watch things."
"Okay Dragonfire!" shouted Charquil. "Let's go!"
Blaze, Charquil, Magma, and Doom run out off the alley and head out to find Soul.

In the black building in the room with 7 chairs four Pokemon are present. Two of the Pokemon are Ring Master and Darc. The chair on the right of Ring Master had thorns and flowers on it. The Pokemon sitting on the chair was a Cacturne. The Cacturne's needles were a grayish color. The name on the chair said, "Thorn Master". The chair to the right of Thorn Master's had Champion Wrestling belts all over it. The Pokemon on the chair was a Metal Machamp. The name on the chair said, "Mecha-Champ".
"Why did you call us here, Ring Master?" asked Mecha-Champ. "Me and Thorny had some business to attend to."
"Mecha-Champ is right," said Thorn Master. "Why are we here?"
"You two are here because I have an important announcement," announced Ring Master. "My apprentice, Darc wishes to learn the Advanced Dark Arts."
"The Advanced Dark Arts?" said Thorn Master. "Isn't that a bit dangerous."
Darc slams his hands in the table, "I will do anything to achieve the power! I want to learn the Advance Dark Arts so I can destroy him."
"Fine then," said Mecha-Champ. "We shall assist you in learning the Advanced Dark Arts."
"Mecha-Champ," sighed Thorn Master. "I guess that I will help too."
"Good," said Ring Master. He turns to face Darc. "We will begin teaching you in three days. So prepare for the most extreme and painful training ever!"
"Yes, Master," said Darc. "Now I would be able to fulfill my goal. To destroy that man!"

Blaze and the team finally arrive at the building where Soul was taken. They look around the building to find a back entrance. They walk into an alley and they see a door and a Lopunny.
"Why hello there," greeted Sara.
"Where is.."said Charquil.
"Where is Soul!" interrupted Blaze.
"You wish to know where Soul is?" asked Sara. "My dear little brother, Soul."
"What?" said Magma. "Your his sister?"
"We are here to get Soul back!" said Charquil.
"Well then you have to get through me!" screamed Sara.
Sara pulls out two swords and gets into a stance. Blaze and Charquil get ready to fight, but Doom walks in front of them.
"I will fight her," said Doom. "You three go into the building and find Soul!"
Magma patted Doom on his back, "Good luck buddy."
Blaze, Charquil, and Magby head towards the door.
Sara runs in front of the door, "Where do you think you're going?"
Black flames comes out of Doom's claws and he attacks Sara. Sara dodges Doom's attack and runs away from the door.
"Go now!" demanded Doom.
Blaze and the others successfully go through the door. Doom blocks the door so Sara can't get pass.
"Looks like it's just me and you now," stated Sara. "This isn't going to be as fun now."
"Prepare to die!" shouted Doom.
Doom and Sara charge each other. Doom strikes his claws at Sara and Sara attacks Doom with her twin swords.

Blaze, Charquil, and Magma enter the main lobby of the building and there are Pokemon everywhere. They all stare the team for a while. Then suddenly they attack them. Blaze blocks the attack of one of the Pokemon. His claws turn to steel and start to grow. He slashes the Pokemon and it disappears. A Nidoking sneaks up behind Blaze with a club. The Nidoking is about to swing, but a giant fire ball flies straight into his face and he disappears.
"Watch your back Blaze," said Charquil. "This isn't one of those Colosseum battles. This is the real deal."
"I know that," said Blaze. He slices a Pokemon in half and throws it at another Pokemon. "Magma you okay?"
"Don't worry boss I am just getting started," said Magma. "Game on!"
Magma grew bigger and his arms are engulfed in flames. The Pokemon around him are in awe. Magma swings his arms and the Pokemon around him are engulfed in flames and they disappear. The rest of the Pokemon retreat.
"Looks like the enemy is retreating," said Charquil. "We should go up higher into the building to find Soul."
"They retreated," sighed Magma. "I was just getting started too."
"Well you will have your chances later," stated Blaze. "Right now we have to worry about finding Soul."
The wall right next to Blaze and Charquil explodes and pieces of the wall fly everywhere. Blaze and Charquil get blown towards Magma. Right where the hole in the wall is a Grovyle is standing there. He has a twig in his mouth and a belt with bricks on it.
Magma gets on his knees and looks at Blaze, "Are you guys okay?"
"Yea we are okay," replied Charquil. He points at the Grovyle, "But who is that?"
Blaze gets up and his claws turn to steel, "Who are you?"
"Why Blaze have you forgotten about your dear friend, Jason?" asked Jason.
"Jason?" said Blaze. "Why are you here?"
"He is probably part of the Organization that kidnapped Soul," stated Charquil. "Am I correct?"
"Yes you are correct Adam or do you prefer Charquil?" said Jason. He looks at Magma, "Looks like Magma had a little too much fun before."
"How do you know our names!" demanded Magma.
"We know everything about your little team," inquired Jason. He gets into a fighting stance, "Enough talk. If you guys want to get to Soul you have to get past me."
Charquil walks in front of Blaze, "I'll take of Jason. You two find Soul."
Charquil is about to take out his staff, but Magma stopped him.
"You go with Blaze to find Soul," said Magma. "I will stall this guy while you guys go."
"Good luck, Magma," said Blaze.
Blaze and Charquil run past Jason and head up the stairs. Jason tries to attack them, but a giant hand blocks him.
"Where do you think you're going?" asked Magma.
Jason jumps back, "Nowhere important. Now let the games begin!"
Jason eyes turned to a dark purple color and he grew sharp blades on his arms. He charged at Magma at full speed. Magma makes hand into a fist and charges Jason.

Blaze and Charquil are running up the stairs to the top floor to find Soul. They haven't seen any enemies since Jason appeared.
"Looks like we are almost at the top floor," said Charquil.
"Then we will be able to kick some butt and save Soul," grinned Blaze.
"Don't let your guard down or you will fall in battle," stated Charquil.
"I know," sighed Blaze. "It looks like we are here."
They stop in front of a big door. Blaze opens the door to see a giant room. In the room there are three Pokemon. One of the Pokemon is Soul and he is tied up. The Pokemon standing in front of Soul was Kirlia. Then there was a Pokemon called an Aerodactyl. The Aerodactyl was different from most Aerodactyls. His body was black and his wings were brown. He had strange symbols on his head. He looked like the boss, Argorok from Twilight Princess. The Kirlia stepped forward with a katana in her hand.
The Aerodactyl moved a little, "Welcome Dragonfire to your final battle!"
It's about time. This is pretty darn good. It's about time I started kicking the crap out of everyone! However, in the future chapters, before posting, go through and check for spelling errors...
Keep up the good work!
The next couple chapters are going to be about fighting.
Doom vs. Sara, Magma vs. Jason (Kudamon), Blaze and Charquil vs. Rose and 80-D (ATD)
Awesome chapter, Jason's acting a little more like I'd thought he would~

Something tells me that these "unofficial" battles are going to come right back and bite them.
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