02-07-2010, 05:28 PM
OK, so I finished chapter one in about an hour, big deal. I forgot that I already wrote it, so I tweaked it and here it is.
Chapter 1
Sorry the chapter's so short, I'm not much of a writer =/
I'm not sure if I'll continue the story or not, I'll leave that to you guys.
Chapter 1
Spoiler:
A snake-like creature falls to the ground, dead.
“I told you not to try it, now look at you.” The speaker was a young looking boy with unruly red hair, green eyes and a bloody sword in hand. “Why do they always think they’re ‘the one to bring me down’? They just die every time.” The boy walks on through a large forest of ashen trees. Suddenly, a man appears from the trees.
“Are you the famous Ziolang Hirasu?” The man says.
The boy sighs, “Yes I am, who’s asking.”
“The one who will bring you down from your high horse.”
“Yeah, like I haven’t heard THAT one before. Look, just leave before you end up like him.” Ziolang replies, pointing at the snake creature.
“Hah! Don’t take me so lightly! I have nothing in common with that weakli-” Ziolang was behind him with a sword in his chest.
“Except being dead. Why don’t they ever listen?” Ziolang continued waling. “Is it really the way we Demons are? Can our purpose be just that? I don’t want to kill them, but what choice do I have? Sigh… as soon as I find Masuke, I’ll have my answers.” He walks on and sees an old house that looks like it’s abandoned for years. “Home sweet home.”
“I told you not to try it, now look at you.” The speaker was a young looking boy with unruly red hair, green eyes and a bloody sword in hand. “Why do they always think they’re ‘the one to bring me down’? They just die every time.” The boy walks on through a large forest of ashen trees. Suddenly, a man appears from the trees.
“Are you the famous Ziolang Hirasu?” The man says.
The boy sighs, “Yes I am, who’s asking.”
“The one who will bring you down from your high horse.”
“Yeah, like I haven’t heard THAT one before. Look, just leave before you end up like him.” Ziolang replies, pointing at the snake creature.
“Hah! Don’t take me so lightly! I have nothing in common with that weakli-” Ziolang was behind him with a sword in his chest.
“Except being dead. Why don’t they ever listen?” Ziolang continued waling. “Is it really the way we Demons are? Can our purpose be just that? I don’t want to kill them, but what choice do I have? Sigh… as soon as I find Masuke, I’ll have my answers.” He walks on and sees an old house that looks like it’s abandoned for years. “Home sweet home.”
I'm not sure if I'll continue the story or not, I'll leave that to you guys.