They are great!
They looks really real to me.
Hm. Well, I might as well give some crit.
(When I say left or right, I'm referring to the viewer's right, not to the subject's right.)
On Crunchew, the beak is a bit weird looking to me. It looks more like a toothy jaw than a beak... I don't know if that's what you're aiming for, but it does look a bit odd.
The feathers on Champarot are shaded a bit strangely, because the wings seem to be shaded from conflicting light sources. The left one is shaded as if the light is coming from the bottom left, while the right one is shaded with a lightsource coming from the top left. Stick with one lightsource and keep it. In addition, the shading on the body is very minimal... the highlight on the leg is off as well. Aim that upwards a little.
Parrotrone is great, but it doesn't resemble its previous forms in the slightest. It's probably the color change; going from white and yellow to black and purple is a pretty jarring switch.
They're all good, though. Do continue.
(03-08-2010 04:42 AM)thenagan Wrote: [ -> ]They looks really real to me.
What do you mean? :o
(04-08-2010 11:35 PM)Kam Wrote: [ -> ]On Crunchew, the beak is a bit weird looking to me. It looks more like a toothy jaw than a beak... I don't know if that's what you're aiming for, but it does look a bit odd.
I wanted him to look simple so i kinda made his head into the beak :P
(04-08-2010 11:35 PM)Kam Wrote: [ -> ]The feathers on Champarot are shaded a bit strangely, because the wings seem to be shaded from conflicting light sources. The left one is shaded as if the light is coming from the bottom left, while the right one is shaded with a lightsource coming from the top left. Stick with one lightsource and keep it. In addition, the shading on the body is very minimal... the highlight on the leg is off as well. Aim that upwards a little.
Thanks, i will try to correct that someday (maybe when i get a bit better at shading and digital art xP)
(04-08-2010 11:35 PM)Kam Wrote: [ -> ]Parrotrone is great, but it doesn't resemble its previous forms in the slightest. It's probably the color change; going from white and yellow to black and purple is a pretty jarring switch.
Actually Champarot was supposed to be a bit darker, making it go like this:
White/Yellow/Blue => Gray/Orange/Purple => Black/Red/Purple but it didn't look too good (colliding with yellow head). I decided to remake it soon with female Cockatiel coloration (no yellow head) so i can make it a bit more darker, hopefuly connecting the gap between Crunchew and Parrotrone nicely.
(04-08-2010 11:35 PM)='Kam Wrote: [ -> ]They're all good, though. Do continue.
I am, soon new ones will appear
Here is Rattata of the region if you didn't see it yet:
http://gbanshee.deviantart.com/#/d2ueyy0
Thanks for the comments and hints :D
Hey I remember you, you drew that Relicanth for Agate! Anyways great drawings, and for the first try, thats a pretty good attempt of digital art! Keep at it :).
(06-08-2010 04:24 AM)Narodin Wrote: [ -> ]Hey I remember you, you drew that Relicanth for Agate! Anyways great drawings, and for the first try, thats a pretty good attempt of digital art! Keep at it :).
Yeah, and the fire ghost XD Long time no see.
Thanks!
I'm going to upload a new one today.
@edit:
Here is the rabbit's counterpart, Weasickle:
http://gbanshee.deviantart.com/art/No-15...nshee&qo=0
Wow those are great! I hate the bunny, but I really like weasickle and his evolution. Kivine is pretty cool too. I like how your considering the animals from the specific region. Good job Banshay.
Thanks :D Well, the bunny is quite controversial, some hate it and some like it XD Few people told me that it's scary, while others say it looks funny XD
I didn't reveal Weasickle's evolution yet, but if you like it from the silhouette then i hope you will like the full design too :D
Yeah, i'm trying to base the monsters on the animals, plants, landscapes, manners and beliefs of New Zealand and Australia, but some monsters will be inspired by something else.
@EDIT
Here is the fire starter :D Based on Tasmanian devil, it will evolve into fire/dark type pokemon.
![[Image: uploadj.th.png]](http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/9303/uploadj.th.png)
Page:
http://gbanshee.deviantart.com/#/d30hkl9
Also, here are 6 exclusive attacks that the final forms of the starters can learn:
Wooden Sword
A powerful attack that may lower the foe's defense by two stages (5%)
Type: Grass
Cathegory: Physical
PP: 5
Power: 90
Accuracy: 90
Hell Fire
An attack that deals damage and curses the foe (5%)
Type: Fire
Cathegory: Special
PP: 5
Power: 90
Accuracy: 90
Sacred Water
An attack that deals more damage against Ghost type (2x)
Type: Water
Cathegory: Special
PP: 5
Power: 90
Accuracy: 90
Mind Storm
The higher the foe's Special Defense, the more damage this move causes
Type: Psychic
Cathegory: Special
PP: 20
Power: ---
Accuracy: 100
Tail Sweep
Inflicts greater damage on faster foes.
Type: Fighting
Cathegory: Physical
PP: 20
Power: ---
Accuracy: 100
Condemn
The more HP the target has, the more powerful this attack is
Type: Dark
Cathegory: Special
PP: 20
Power: ---
Accuracy: 100
Phew, no comments... i'm tired of editing the same post, so i will make a new one ^^; Hopefully i won't be punished for this, lol.
Incinder, incense pokemon:
![[Image: incense.th.png]](http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/4758/incense.th.png)
Dex page:
http://gbanshee.deviantart.com/#/d30su22
![[Image: uploado.png]](http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/7779/uploadcp.png)
![[Image: uploadq.png]](http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/8745/uploadqt.png)
![[Image: uploadj.th.png]](http://img232.imageshack.us/i/uploadj.png/)
![[Image: incense.th.png]](http://img843.imageshack.us/i/incense.png/)