31-07-2010, 01:38 AM
Door
She stood there. Stood there. Stood there. She gazed at the crimson. Crimson everywhere. On the doors. The walls. Everywhere. She knew. She knew there was something eerie about the door especially but she couldn’t move because of the desiring presence around her. She knew she should’ve turned and ran just like her friends did but the presence pulled her. Pulled her into the darkness. Finally, the spell broke and she could move. Slowly, her hand reached out and onto the crimson door handle. It slipped down and returned to her side. She then reached again and felt the slippery crimson doorknob turn in her hand automatically. She did not flinch and she did not draw her hand back. She simply let go and waited for her new destiny. The door creaked and groaned open, letting a familiar stanch in the air and a strange heat surround her. She descended into the mysterious gloomy doorway. Once in, the heat increased to a scorch but, she never turned back for she knew that it would lead to her demise. As she walked, she heard a haunting voice, “You are mine forever more.” She walked emotionless deeper into the corridor of the hot room. Then once more she heard the voice, “You shall burn in hell forever. You may never leave.” Again she walked deeper and deeper and deeper until finally, the heat unbearable, another door but this time she knew exactly what was behind it, the throne of the haunting voice. Reaching for the sizzling handle she opened it letting back out all the sins of the world. All the way into the back of the room, she saw him, the devil. With his Searing hot complexion and his bulky features and his piercing dull gray eyes, he spoke in a haunting monotonous tone, “Makaela, why do you choose to be here?”
Out of her daze, she replied, “Because it is my destiny to rid the world of your evil tyranny forever, so I chose to die so I could come here and defeat you once and for all.”
With a chuckle, he told her, “Dear insolent girl you know it isn’t your destiny to defeat me. So I now shall send you back before your death for as much as I want for you to die it is not your time to be here.”
She awoke with a searing hot pain on her for head. “Oh sweetie, are you okay?! I’m so sorry I hit you on the head with the frying pan, it was a big accident!”
“Its okay mom I know it was an accident,” and she walked out of the kitchen with an emotionless look on her face…
The ending is sort of a gag...
And btw, i tried to put as many details in here as i could
She stood there. Stood there. Stood there. She gazed at the crimson. Crimson everywhere. On the doors. The walls. Everywhere. She knew. She knew there was something eerie about the door especially but she couldn’t move because of the desiring presence around her. She knew she should’ve turned and ran just like her friends did but the presence pulled her. Pulled her into the darkness. Finally, the spell broke and she could move. Slowly, her hand reached out and onto the crimson door handle. It slipped down and returned to her side. She then reached again and felt the slippery crimson doorknob turn in her hand automatically. She did not flinch and she did not draw her hand back. She simply let go and waited for her new destiny. The door creaked and groaned open, letting a familiar stanch in the air and a strange heat surround her. She descended into the mysterious gloomy doorway. Once in, the heat increased to a scorch but, she never turned back for she knew that it would lead to her demise. As she walked, she heard a haunting voice, “You are mine forever more.” She walked emotionless deeper into the corridor of the hot room. Then once more she heard the voice, “You shall burn in hell forever. You may never leave.” Again she walked deeper and deeper and deeper until finally, the heat unbearable, another door but this time she knew exactly what was behind it, the throne of the haunting voice. Reaching for the sizzling handle she opened it letting back out all the sins of the world. All the way into the back of the room, she saw him, the devil. With his Searing hot complexion and his bulky features and his piercing dull gray eyes, he spoke in a haunting monotonous tone, “Makaela, why do you choose to be here?”
Out of her daze, she replied, “Because it is my destiny to rid the world of your evil tyranny forever, so I chose to die so I could come here and defeat you once and for all.”
With a chuckle, he told her, “Dear insolent girl you know it isn’t your destiny to defeat me. So I now shall send you back before your death for as much as I want for you to die it is not your time to be here.”
She awoke with a searing hot pain on her for head. “Oh sweetie, are you okay?! I’m so sorry I hit you on the head with the frying pan, it was a big accident!”
“Its okay mom I know it was an accident,” and she walked out of the kitchen with an emotionless look on her face…
The ending is sort of a gag...
And btw, i tried to put as many details in here as i could