31-07-2010, 02:03 AM
Heres my story i've been working on. Please assist me by submitting a Title and also ways to progress into the story. Thank you. By the way, this is only the introduction and it is very short but if you have any suggestions please feel free to comment.
Spoiler:
He kills everyone that aggravates him. No one knows how he does it or if it's on accident but, what they do know is that if you cross him, you'll either be dead within the hour or dead within the minute. His name is Garrison Moore. He's 15 years old and an orphan who lives anywhere that he hasn't caused trouble or terror yet. His parents had died in a very tragic accident when he was 10 and for the past 5 years up until the present, he had lived with the terrible death curse that was mysteriously laid upon him when his parents had died. The accident that had killed his parents made the papers the next day and whenever people had met Garrison, people would say they were sorry and that it was an accident. He knew it were no accident for he was a very smart boy and there was one event that he had encountered that told him his curse was not coincidence. He recalls that event and has nightmares about it almost every night. He knows what he must do in order to to stop the nightmares and dispel his curse.